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I'll read it when I finish my homework.
 
Anyway. I like that you're bring Porple out as the villain here, and that - plot twist! - this is a dystopian future. Other than that, not much to say. I think you should have waited a bit more before bringing out backstory, though. Though I guess this isn't a lot of backstory.
 
but resolutions was, like, my favorite thing on UP so far

so what if it was serious

also you told me that sometimes it just felt right

that's not super serious now is it