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This updated twice while I was away?

I hadn't noticed, sorry. I'll review as soon as I can.
 
Javelin Noir is now offline.
note: this never happens irl because i always nearly always win our verbal exchanges

Anyways, I actually really enjoy the way the story is going. Remember how I said I don't particularly enjoy "modern" stories?

This has crossed the border into sci-fi and has suddenly captured my interest. It had a lot to do with Uniju's sword cauterizing the wound he gave, which is exactly how lightsabers work in Star Wars.

Oh and the Matrix-esque VR duels are cool too.