Project Aviate: Now (kinda) accepting sign-ups!

If you've finished reading the story, rate it!

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also I hang out here, I guess
Project Aviate can be seen here.

Features:
  • Exciting gameplay mechanics! (it's written in first person)
  • A rapid-fire update system! (short stages, frequent updates)
  • Easier navigation! (the entire story can be accessed from the main page, using the tab interface- you never have to load another page)
  • Blood! (blood)
  • More blood! (seriously, a lot of it)
  • A stupid amount of pop-culture references!
  • A boss soundtrack (read: songs composed for the story's "boss fights") made by Diving Station!

Inspired by:
  • (nanananana-)Batman
  • No More Heroes
  • Metal Gear Solid
  • Assassin's Creed
  • Uncharted
  • Team Fortress 2
  • Half-Life/Portal series
  • ...and many more!

By "kinda" accepting sign-ups, that means you're allowed to sign up but I may or may not implement you.

If you sign up, however, you're giving me permission to do whatever I want with your character.

Don't worry, you'll be awesome. I never fail to meet expectations on a characterization front.

Read. Review. Enjoy.
 
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So what, is this a remake or redo or sequel or whatever?
 
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>Ishimaru
>Head of crime syndicate

Amazing.

Anyway, good job on the intro, I think I'll like this much better than Typical Tragedy.
 
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Nabber said:
>Ishimaru
>Head of crime syndicate
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Part of a crime syndicate.

I read DR myself- the irony is intentional.

Anyways, this is going to be much different from Typical Tragedy or Aviatebeta, so I hope you guys'll like it.
 
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Good, but I think you could have made the electrocution scene more agonizing.
 
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First time I've tried to write a torture scene.

(and before you say Tabuu's Guide To Sadistic Torture, I never took that seriously)
 
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Nabber said:
Anyway, good job on the intro, I think I'll like this much better than Typical Tragedy.
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Only because you died in TT.
Travis Touchdown said:
(and before you say Tabuu's Guide To Sadistic Torture, I never took that seriously)
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[me=Jack_Noir]stamps his foot in frustration[/me]

Curses! You anticipated me!

Hector returns... I'm not sure if that's good or not. : | My jury is out for now.

Also this is actually pretty interesting and intriguing from the start, which was one flaw of Typical Tragedy - nothing happened in the beginning.
 
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Hector has had a complete redesign and is basically a completely different character in this, you know. : P

also this
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I hopped onto the ledge of the roof and leaped off of it, crashing onto the brown clay roof of the East Side's local Chinese restaurant, "The Wiki Wall".

The place was run by a group of people who thought "ching chong" was legitimate Chinese and that as long as a dish is served with a side of fried rice, it's totes China, bro.

The owners are douchebags. But the food? Actually kind of good.
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