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I'll first see what can I fix or not in the article
It has more problems beyond its size.Time Turner said:I do have issues with the article, like the seriously-short length, occasionally-flowery writing, awkward organization of sections, weird table of moves that isn't all that useful and would be much better as an actual paragraph, and lackluster intro, but... Actually, what am I saying, this really shouldn't be a featured article.Baby Luigi said:
All of the images crammed into the Brawl section make it look bulky and unwieldy, and the Sm4sh section meanwhile has no accompanying image.Duskull said:
The article is definitely trying to include as many fluffy and extraneous details as possible, which isn't for the better.Duskull said:Also Bramble Scramble (Donkey Kong Country 2: Diddy's Kong Quest) is a very long article for just a level (although looking through the other level pages for this game are of a similar length), especially considering how most other level articles are written for recent games like the Special levels in Super Mario 3D World. It's also poorly written and reads like a walkthrough, which is against policy. And obviously if we strip it down to how other level articles are it'd be too short to be featured.