Typical Tragedy

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Don't Fear said:
Yes, because I had absolutely no dialogue or description or plot advancement or humor or anything of the sort in that chapter. Maybe you weren't paying attention to how I tried to end almost all the fighting and had a little hint in there about Alex's true character. But no, I'm ready to bet you just saw fighting and cried and clicked away before you bothered to read the rest of the chapter.
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Tabs, you're a cool guy, but for someone who wants criticism, you sure do love to get mad at people who criticize you.
 
The Evil Midnight Bomber What Bombs at Midnight said:
Don't Fear said:
Yes, because I had absolutely no dialogue or description or plot advancement or humor or anything of the sort in that chapter. Maybe you weren't paying attention to how I tried to end almost all the fighting and had a little hint in there about Alex's true character. But no, I'm ready to bet you just saw fighting and cried and clicked away before you bothered to read the rest of the chapter.
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Tabs, you're a cool guy, but for someone who wants criticism, you sure do love to get mad at people who criticize you.
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He didn't remark on anything else in that chapter. That's what made me angry.
 
The Evil Midnight Bomber What Bombs at Midnight said:
Tabs, you're a cool guy, but for someone who wants criticism, you sure do love to get mad at people who criticize you.
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no, he only gets mad at Nabber

I did post a much longer criticizing post than Nabber's and it was fine, so...

Nabber said:
Dr. Javelin said:
Nabber said:
I'm fine with reading long chapters but I have trouble reading long passages online.
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What's the difference?
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Long chapters are online.
Regular long chapters are in ink.
Big difference.
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If you're that desperate for ink chapters, then print it out and read it in real life. TA DA
 
[quote author=The concluding notes]A double agent was mentioned and I misled most of you to believe it was Anton- but the one that was referrred to in the conversation between Murzon, Rudnicki and Zanza had been with the group from the beginning.[/quote]
You little trickster. I mentioned earlier (in fact, if I had time, I would quote myself) that it couldn't be Anton because he wasn't with them from the beginning and you specifically told me that becuse Anton was part of the higher-up decision to send a team that he was with them from the beginning.

You could have just said you outright lied to us, it would be better.

EDIT: Oh wait, it says "most of you" so I suppose I maybe fall into that category?
That said... this was awesome. Your writing at the finest.

(and yes Nabber there wasn't as much fighting this time, it was mostly backstory and reveals so don't say that it was still repetitive)

I can't really say much more without spoilering it, and though I could spoiler tag those, I highly doubt you people reading this will be able to contain your curiosity. So go read it.
 
Nice. I loved the backstory that was in the chapter, especially Rudnicki and MBV's parts (though I'm not really sure how relevant MBV's backstory is at the moment.) It was a great way to end the chapter, though I'm still kind of confused about the whole traitor thing.

Also
I took the essence of this world’s existence, and it became one with me.
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Alex=Zanza?

I know that you are going to pull something with Zanza. I don't know if this is it but you are definitely going to do something.
 
No, no- Alex, for just a moment, had omniscience- and it allowed him to prepare for the War.
MBV's will become relevant much later on.

And Javelin, I don't think I'm even capable of coming up with something that crazy.
yet
 
Yeah this is starting to turn into what I was planning for Project Mercury.

I guess it's even more inspired by Tabuu than I thought.