Typical Tragedy

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Tabuuownsall132x2

also I hang out here, I guess
http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/Typical_Tragedy/1_-_The_Grateful_Dead

Gasp! Is it? Can it be?

It's been updated!
 

Garlic Man

Name-change free since 2018
Don't Fear said:
Alright, you're probably wondering what you just saw in the above post. :P
actually, no


Also, could you take out the spaces between those lines in your sig? Tall-ass sigs are my pet peeve on this forum.
 

Nabber

Artisanal Cheese Taster
I know I've said this a thousand times before, but this is amazing. I really want to see where you go with this.
 

Garlic Man

Name-change free since 2018
Don't Fear said:
Can you make a fucking relevant post?
My post was totally relevant, I was replying to something you said earlier in the thread.


Also, could you take out the spaces between those lines in your sig? Tall-ass sigs are my pet peeve on this forum.
 

Tabuuownsall132x2

also I hang out here, I guess
That post was just filler, for the most part. You could've just PMed me, asking me to cut down my sig.

Which, currently, I cannot do. As I am on a phone.
 

Dr. Javelin

Nathan Latsk
So I read the second chapter.

Your pen sounds awesome, Tabuu. The only problem with it is...

I actually had the same idea before you wrote this.

Now I can't ever use a pen as my weapon. :(

That said, great chapter.
 

Zero777

Middle Eastern Federation
I like how you describe things in the story, first the trolls and now a user's power
 

Nabber

Artisanal Cheese Taster
All good as usual, except I've completely forgotten what an Alva was. Could you try to ease the reader into the world of Typical Tragedy?
 

Dr. Javelin

Nathan Latsk
Donut said:
All good as usual, except I've completely forgotten what an Alva was. Could you try to ease the reader into the world of Typical Tragedy?
Re-read chapter 1. Alex explains it pretty well.

Also it's Adva not Alva. And they're like Elite Mooks, not too powerful but not pathetic either.
 

Tabuuownsall132x2

also I hang out here, I guess
Ease the reader?

Dude, this is the third chapter of introductions so far. I haven't even finished introducing the main cast, and the plot hasn't even really begun yet. 0_o
 

Dr. Javelin

Nathan Latsk
Hmm.

You know you are kind of making a huge deal about you being weak, and it's kind of annoying actually. Especially because you aren't that weak with a freaking sword of darkness and stuff.

It's okay to make yourself more powerful as long as it isn't overpowered.
 

Tabuuownsall132x2

also I hang out here, I guess
My character isn't weak, but he isn't nearly as strong as he used to be. Do you know how /frustrating/ that is for somebody?
 

Nabber

Artisanal Cheese Taster
Don't Fear said:
Oh, and a sword of darkness- against the only creatures that can resist it. Just saying.
It's still a freaking sword wielded by a skilled user.
By the way, I like the pillars of light. I don't know why but I do.
 

Tabuuownsall132x2

also I hang out here, I guess
The darkness makes it a blade without cutting power, so the ink had to be taken out to render it a normal (and useful) weapon. Once Tabuu gets his other ink cartridges and gets upgrades to his pen, he will be much stronger. For now, though, you guys are just going to have to suck it up.
 
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