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Re: Corruption

Action/Disaster was the genre I was going for, but neither of those have really started up too much yet.

Part 11 has been released!
 
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Excellent as always.
Also, you did a very good job portraying my voice. I read it, and I was like,"uh-huh, that's me".
Bravo!
 
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Sure, sure.

Part 12
 
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I think the fight was a bit rushed, but the fight wasn't the main focus, so I like the chapter, it is a good chapter.
 
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Oh, I see...an eye for an eye. Well...eyes for legs in this situation.

I blind you in my story, and you cripple me in your story? Bit harsh don't you think?
 
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Not really, you can move around and see. I can't see where I'm going.