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Pokémon Trainer Nate said:
Then make it, what are you waiting for?
Froshade's Adventure: Dark Danger
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Then make it, what are you waiting for?
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Here's Part 2 guys! Imgur and Iaza were being bitches so I used tinypic for the job.
Good job. Cliffhangers can be good sometimes and this is one of those times!Miracle Matter said:
Here's Part 2 guys! Imgur and Iaza were being bitches so I used tinypic for the job.
10/10
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Pokémon Trainer Nate said:
It's Crobat, duh.
Rin Kagamine said:Good job. Cliffhangers can be good sometimes and this is one of those times!
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Thanks. *gives a virtual hug*
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Pokémon Trainer Nate said:
Crobat is inside the bag, that's why she's white.
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Part 3 guys! In battles, the background will be white because I'm very lazy.
Also, sorry for the white background in the last picture, I forgot to color it
Also, sorry for the white background in the last picture, I forgot to color it
YoshiMonsta
Yoshi! Yoshi!
The text is too small and I can't make it bigger.
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Icanhasgoomba said:
Okay.
First picture: Stone Edge!
Second picture: Shadow Ball! Icy Wind!
Third and Fourth picture: Miss!
Fifth picture: Critical hit!
Sixth picture: Bite!
8th picture: Mega Punch!
9th picture: SURF!!!one
10th picture: FireEevee fainted!
12th picture: Crobat: I'm free! Thanks Rhydon and what's-your-name-white-rubber-ball!
13th picture: Rhydon: Your welcome! And this guy's name is Froshade, he helped me save you! Froshade: Hi...
14th picture: Crobat: Your name is Froshade? I'm Crobat! And I'd rather sit on your head than being trapped inside a stupid bag. Froshade: I'm so embarassed. Crobat: Hey you! Get lost! Go look for someone else's head! Wlizzard: Was that necessary?
Lol. Once again, great job. I'm not just being nice. I'm also being honest.
10/10
10/10
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Rin Kagamine said:
Thanks again. :D
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Complaint: It's difficult to tell which order the text is supposed to be read. I usually read from top to bottom, but judging by the 14th panel in your latest comic, that's not the way it's supposed to be.
And also the text is too small in some panels.
And also the text is too small in some panels.
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Epic Nitwit said:
What about the overall story? I'll try making the text bigger next time.
Revin
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idk, I'll decide when there's more. I'll at least keep reading it.
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That's cool, but please add eyes on Wlizzard (the blue hat the Froshade wears)
I was owned.
darn it.
darn it.
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Pokémon Trainer Nate said:okMiracle Matter said:
EDIT:
Thank you, looks better now.
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Guys, I just finished Part 4! Sorry if it's taking too long to upload, my internet is being a bitch.
Edit: Nevermind, here's Part 4, sorry if it's too short. I made it short so it doesn't take like years to upload.
Edit: Nevermind, here's Part 4, sorry if it's too short. I made it short so it doesn't take like years to upload.
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LN1 said:
Dude, Rhydon can learn Surf in the Pokemon games. So, I thought it'd be a great idea for him to survive underwater.