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Re: A great story

Vanillite said:
Into n00b mode!

O MAH GAWD U ALMST DIHD IHN ELEMNTREH SCHOL????????? U MUST BEE AWSUM!!!!!!!!

Exit n00b mode.

And you call me a bad writer??? :)


8=Authors birthday!

STOKAL
based on a true story

Part 19
by Nintendoobsessed

The wind power picked up. Said Klaskel. It spun around me, exploding the head of the men around me. The brains formed together. A man had been wearing a cloak. The wind took it with 2 limbless arms, it created a monster. Sarah gasped.

Stylop enterd the lone cafetiara-incept for headless policemen. My sensors tell me Commander Computer is heading for the 2nd floor. He walked down the hallway to the gym.

Cant we just stay down there? Cried Ryan. We...have...to...get...urk!...out...of here. Said Mario. At the current moment, they were climbing up the wall with a grappling hook made out of many things. Finnaly, he pushed Ryan up to the office, then he climbed out. We better get out of here soon. They headed for the gym. They saw Susie. A girl! HEY! Called Mario. Susie thought it was a robot. she ran to the 2nd floor of the gym. After her! Yelled Mario as he ran after her.

Come. Said Mother Brain. They came to the 2nd floor. Now...you let the CRYSTAL ONE ESCAPE? I didnt mean to Mother Brain! Please! That Stokal you let escape contained so much life! Im really sorry Mother Brain! I had been listening to the whole thing. A life container? We barely have any Stokals left! And they are for the Ulti-borgs process! And we still cant find the g- Susie barged in just at the wrong moment. A ESCAPED, UNCULTRIZED 2ND GRADE GIRL? THATS IT! She struck Commander Computer in the face. She left, just in time for Mario, and Ryan to show up. The door shut. I will have to kill all of you to relieve status. His fist smashed into the ground rumbling the room, everyone falling. Commander Computer roared. Stylop jumped threw the open window, falling flat on his face. Muffled swear words came from Stylop. Ryan! YOU! Said Commander Computer. YOU HAVE ESCAPED! This SHOWDOWN STARTS NOWWWWW!

Next Time: The showdown of Commander Computer starts NOWWW! Part 20

To be continued...
 
Re: A great story

Nintendoobsessed said:
Come. Said Mother Brain. They came to the 2nd floor. Now...you let the CRYSTAL ONE ESCAPE? I didnt mean to Mother Brain! Please! That Stokal you let escape contained so much life! Im really sorry Mother Brain! I had been listening to the whole thing. A life container? We barely have any Stokals left! And they are for the Ulti-borgs process! And we still cant find the g- Susie barged in just at the wrong moment. A ESCAPED, UNCULTRIZED 2ND GRADE GIRL? THATS IT! She struck Commander Computer in the face. She left, just in time for Mario, and Ryan to show up. The door shut. I will have to kill all of you to relieve status. His fist smashed into the ground rumbling the room, everyone falling. Commander Computer roared. Stylop jumped threw the open window, falling flat on his face. Muffled swear words came from Stylop. Ryan! YOU! Said Commander Computer. YOU HAVE ESCAPED! This SHOWDOWN STARTS NOWWWWW!
So uhhh

Is one person saying the whole thing? Because the way it's put, I really can't tell.
 
Re: A great story

Nintendoobsessed said:
Vanillite said:
Into n00b mode!

O MAH GAWD U ALMST DIHD IHN ELEMNTREH SCHOL????????? U MUST BEE AWSUM!!!!!!!!

Exit n00b mode.

And you call me a bad writer??? :)
You know what sarcasm means, right?
 
Re: A great story

SuperMario25 said:
He doesnt get it.

Why do you keep saying that when you cant even understand my storie?


20th part!

STOKAL
based on a true story.

Part 20
by Nintendoobsessed

Commander Computer had changed. Susie gasped and backed up into the roaring Stylop. His head flew up, knocking Susie out. WHAT THE *ELL IS GOING ON? Commander Blasted a rocket punch. I quickly shifted to the floor aiming Sparks at Commanders leg. IF I CANT KILL YOU... He swung his spiked arm around in Marios Stomach. Blood exploded, he swung his arm back around. I jumped at Commanders face with Sparks. He shrecked, and fell backwards, and sparks exploded out. I turned to Mario. He was dying. Ack...I...have...to tell you something. Mother Brain... I think... generator... worse... Klamkel...-CRASH! Commander grabbed me. You monster! You will pay!

The monster or Mother Brain. I was immediatly her servant. She took me and we headed for a port. A NAVY port. She hid me outside, and told me I wasent powerful enough. When she came out, a navy man was with her, said Klaskel.

Sparks flew into his face. He screamed. I ran to Susie. Commanders head exploded. Mario watched. Nerver thought I'd see Commander Computers death. Stylop, ran to the headless computers body, now on the ground. Wahhhh! Mario was dead, so was Commander Computer. The head had ripped open a gate.

Klamkel sighed. At least Stylop wasent there to swear at him. Mother Brain barged in. Hello, Mother Brain he said. At the moment, Commander Computer is eliminating those children. Said Mother Brain. Im done. Now what. Said Klamkel. Back to your rooom Klaskel! A door opened. Klamkel enterd it.

I carried Susie down the steps. The skinless Ryan followed telling me about what he had seen. I told him what I knew. We have to go back to the labs he said. To face and encounter the nightmare.

Next Time: A important discovery... Part 21.

To be continued...
 
Re: A great story

Nintendoobsessed said:
SuperMario25 said:
He doesnt get it.

Why do you keep saying that when you cant even understand my storie?
So you admit that your story is unreadable yet you don't bother changing it.
Obviously a troll,
 
Re: A great story

Yoshiwalker said:
So uhhh

Is one person saying the whole thing? Because the way it's put, I really can't tell.
HEY HEY WRITER PERSON READ THIS
Nabber Simpson said:
Nintendoobsessed said:
SuperMario25 said:
He doesnt get it.

Why do you keep saying that when you cant even understand my storie?
So you admit that your story is unreadable yet you don't bother changing it.
Obviously a troll,
I think that making a poorly written story doesn't exactly qualify as being a troll.......

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