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Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide, open for suggestions)
« on: August 19, 2017, 05:23:54 PM »
Yes, people! I finally have decided to apply for the 'Shroom! Yaaaaaayyyyyyy! I'm writing the travel guide, which I thought is a good section for me to write, because I don't know.

Anyway, Here're the links for now. Enjoy!

Issue 125: Prism Island
Issue 126: Toad City
Issue 128: The Underwhere
Issue 129: Snowball park
Issue 132: More Prism Island
Issue 139: Coconut Mall

And also, can you please give me feedback so that I know what I should do in the future to make my sections better?

Suggestions are open! Suggest away!
« Last Edit: October 21, 2018, 12:12:47 AM by Lucario »

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #2 on: September 17, 2017, 11:35:14 AM »
A bit late on the updte, but Issue 126 of the 'Shroom has been released!

Now I noticed a few mistakes while rereading my section that I fixed yesterday, sended them to MCD in a hurry, but there sure are some I missed.

Anyway, here it is.

Issue 126: Toad City

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #3 on: September 17, 2017, 05:40:57 PM »
Good article!
Officially proclaimed 'wildly unfunny'.

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #4 on: November 19, 2017, 01:56:48 PM »
Bumping this to say that this issue's Travel Guide was the best one you've written so far. The writing was entertaining and the illustrations added to the humor well. Good job!

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #5 on: November 19, 2017, 02:18:11 PM »
Thank you so much! Btw, here is the quick link I forgot to put earlier.

Issue 128: The Underwhere

Enjoy! (For those who havenít read yet)

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #6 on: December 28, 2017, 10:54:58 PM »
So once again, I forgot to put the link when the issue came out.

Way to go Koops, we’re going places!

Anyway here it is.

Issue 129: Snowball park

Have a nice read!
« Last Edit: December 28, 2017, 10:57:17 PM by Koops »

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #7 on: December 28, 2017, 10:56:19 PM »
Also double post but just to thank the 'Shroom staff for putting my sections in their SOTM as of late. It really means a lot.

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #8 on: March 18, 2018, 12:03:45 AM »
Let me clarify something...

Apparently my section wasnít fully uploaded when the Issue got released, so if it looks bad to you, you'd know the reason.

My biggest problem is that I had to send it to MK because apparently MCD isnít around at the moment, and the fact that my timezone is like 10 hours away of the one in which you americans reading this live in. So by the time the message warning me of MCD's absence got sent to me, I was asleep.

Please excuse the delayed quality of my section. It should be right in about not so long.

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #9 on: March 18, 2018, 01:26:34 AM »
Two travel guide writers meet, one far superior to the other. (Hint: You.)


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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #10 on: March 18, 2018, 03:47:33 AM »
Two travel guide writers meet, one far superior to the other. (Hint: You.)



If thatís a way to say my section was cool, then thanks!

Also itís a bit messed up in some places because of whatever reasons that got in the way but overall, it still looks good. These last words were things in a message I sent to MCD so please ignore them. Anyway hereís a link!

Issue 132: More Prism Island

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #11 on: March 19, 2018, 10:51:11 AM »
Also kinda late on that statement but credit to FTG because the artwork of Huey I used belongs to him.

Didnít want to be guilty of copyright infringement or anything.

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #12 on: March 27, 2018, 12:35:32 AM »

Didn't want to be guilty of copyright infringement or anything.

It's too late, you're under arrest, sir.

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #13 on: March 28, 2018, 03:58:28 AM »
I've noticed you've been improving your drawings a bit.  Keep it up! :bowser:

Speech bubbles and dialogue segments can be tricky, though.  With your back-and-forth parts like with Huey at the end I would try doing something that makes each part a bit more easily distinguishable, such as bolding the name of the speaker of each line, or little heads like in the interview portion of Ltq's Anniversary Announcements.  I would also try to experiment with having the text wrap around the images so there's less blank space, and see if this works for how you want your section to flow.  These are just some things to try since I enjoy reading your section and enjoy seeing steady improvement!



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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #14 on: March 28, 2018, 10:03:10 AM »
Will definitely look into that, thanks for your feedback! ;)

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).
« Reply #15 on: April 03, 2018, 02:53:43 AM »
So I donít know if anyone knows that but, well, just some kind of little announcement.

Iím open for suggestions! Feel free to suggest any location in the Marioverse (or even maybe Zelda or Kirby universes, I may consider one day.) I may consider visiting any location suggested in the future.

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide, open for suggestions)
« Reply #16 on: April 03, 2018, 03:16:09 AM »
Coconut Mall, there's so much you could do!  I wonder if they've got an Auntie Anne's?



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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide, open for suggestions)
« Reply #17 on: October 21, 2018, 12:11:59 AM »
Issue 139: Coconut Mall

Your wish has been fulfilled, master. You may now release me from under your disposition.

AH!

Oh hey, Anton, what's going on? It's like I've been hypnotized... what happened?

Anyway, here it is at last, Coconut Mall! I told you I consider requests! And I made this one come true.

It says I'm going to Alola somewhere near the end, but that ain't the truth... in reality, I am preparing a big journey across many Nintendo universes! Something you should probably look forward to, because you might just like it.

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide, open for suggestions)
« Reply #18 on: October 22, 2018, 03:36:46 PM »
Quote from: Travel Guide

I am frankly appalled and I hope you feel ashamed.

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Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide, open for suggestions)
« Reply #19 on: October 23, 2018, 11:03:07 AM »
No Grass-type Pokemon have been targeted during the making of this section, rest assured.

Unless Piantas are Pokemon.