Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide, open for suggestions)

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Yes, people! I finally have decided to apply for the 'Shroom! Yaaaaaayyyyyyy! I'm writing the travel guide, which I thought is a good section for me to write, because I don't know.

Anyway, Here're the links for now. Enjoy!

Issue 125: Prism Island
Issue 126: Toad City
Issue 128: The Underwhere
Issue 129: Snowball park
Issue 132: More Prism Island
Issue 139: Coconut Mall
Issue 141: Buncha locations...

And also, can you please give me feedback so that I know what I should do in the future to make my sections better?

Suggestions are open! Suggest away!
 
Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).

A bit late on the updte, but Issue 126 of the 'Shroom has been released!

Now I noticed a few mistakes while rereading my section that I fixed yesterday, sended them to MCD in a hurry, but there sure are some I missed.

Anyway, here it is.

Issue 126: Toad City
 
Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).

Bumping this to say that this issue's Travel Guide was the best one you've written so far. The writing was entertaining and the illustrations added to the humor well. Good job!
 
Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).

Also double post but just to thank the 'Shroom staff for putting my sections in their SOTM as of late. It really means a lot.
 
Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).

Let me clarify something...

Apparently my section wasn’t fully uploaded when the Issue got released, so if it looks bad to you, you'd know the reason.

My biggest problem is that I had to send it to MK because apparently MCD isn’t around at the moment, and the fact that my timezone is like 10 hours away of the one in which you americans reading this live in. So by the time the message warning me of MCD's absence got sent to me, I was asleep.

Please excuse the delayed quality of my section. It should be right in about not so long.
 
Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).

Two travel guide writers meet, one far superior to the other. (Hint: You.)
 
Re: Koops' 'Shroom sections (Travel Guide).

ArchagentEverlasting said:
Two travel guide writers meet, one far superior to the other. (Hint: You.)
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If that’s a way to say my section was cool, then thanks!

Also it’s a bit messed up in some places because of whatever reasons that got in the way but overall, it still looks good. These last words were things in a message I sent to MCD so please ignore them. Anyway here’s a link!

Issue 132: More Prism Island