The Rise of X

[GalacticPetey]

I'm back. I can't make chapter at a very fast rate. I have to work on two other stories. I'll try to get chapter 2 out soon.

 

[Zero777]

Take your time

 

[banjonator1]

Read Tabuu's review of your story if you haven't read it yet.

 

[Nabber]

He posted a review? Where?

 

[banjonator1]

I want to say in the second episode of Late Night. GP, He's a little harsh, but that's Tabuu.

 

[Raiko Horikawa]

Actually, he reviewed Mastermind Troll vs. Everyone.

 

[banjonator1]

Oops, you're right. Nevermind.

 

[GalacticPetey]

I'm back to working on this.

 

[GalacticPetey]

http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/The_Rise_of_X/Chapter_2
It is here. Yes, I know it's short.

 

[Zero777]

I found it pretty good for a short chapter.

6/7

 

[GalacticPetey]

Thanks for feedback.

 

[GalacticPetey]

Chapter 3 will be released sometime around the turn of the month.

 

[Zero777]

Okay

 

[banjonator1]

Just got around to reading it. Real nice.

Also I love lamp.

 

[Zero777]

GP, when does the ass-kicking start?

 

[GalacticPetey]

GP, when does the ass-kicking start?

The ass kicking starts when it's ass kicking time. But the question is, who's ass gets kicked?

 

[Zero777]

X's? No wait, the gang won't take him seriously at first and get their asses kicked!

 

[GalacticPetey]

Damn it Zero! Now I have to cancel the story!

.Just know, there will be multiple confrontations.

 

[Zero777]

This is going to kick ass!

 

[GalacticPetey]

Here it is. Chapter 3. It's a little violent.

http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/The_Rise_of_X/Chapter_3

 

[Zero777]

5/7

I can tell we're getting close to the action. Not a lot happened but I'm not disappointed. Flow is good and grammar is good, overall it's a good chapter.

 

[GalacticPetey]

Thanks. Grammar is one thing I've been trying to improve on.

 

[Zero777]

Although I have to say that I find it pretty stupid to completely ruin the whole point of the previous story by saying he regenerated from one measly cell.

 

[GalacticPetey]

I just needed a way to show how strong Mastermind is. It makes X seem more powerful when he kills someone who can live through even the most horrid injurys.

 

[Nabber]

There is a difference between powerful and over-powered, GP.