Canceled Story: Wiki's Danger

Was this story sucky?

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Re: Wiki's Danger

Wait. I suggested the idea, so can I be editor? Or maybe I would be too critical...
 
Look, everyone's first stories suck. I'm too ashamed of my FanFiction works to even post my account here. You just take advice and then you will have a good story. It's called constructive critiscism or however you spell it. Don't write a story if you won't take advice.
 
Why did you cancel this? Maybe you can start again, with someone helping you out, like an editor. The only way this will improve is if you keep practicing.
 
Don't worry buddy, I used to suck that muc-
No, I didn't.

But in all seriousness, yes, your story sucks. If I was given ten acres of the desert and counted every grain of sand within as ten declarations of how bad this story was, I wouldn't even have one eighth of what I'm trying to express here.

Keep writing, though. And learn to take criticism so you can get better.
 
Yoshidude99 said:
It was a good story. My story sucks more
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Look, stop saying your stories suck. They do, but that can be changed if only you bother taking advice and trying. YD99, I'm still waiting for your copy of your Crash story for editing.