Typical Tragedy

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I thought I already told you they're still great and it'll be interesting to see how the Murzon sidestory goes. Also there's a 90% probably of more dreams of Michael's memories, which'll be cool. And that psycho Rudnicki is well, terrifyingly psychotic. But no doubt Zanza is 99% more likely to be even worse in all ways. Oh, and check your UP forum messages if you haven't yet. ;)
 
Review:

Everything went smooth and nice, no big complaints here, and it was small enough that it wouldn't be a drag.

6.9/7

EDIT: May I also request to be a character in the story?
 
David T. Darlton said:
EDIT: May I also request to be a character in the story?
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Psh man everyone wants to be in this story.

Also I'm glad to say that this chapter
has been accessed 33 times.
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Not quite good enough, but much better. Finally people are starting to pay attention.

(now I shall start adding subconscious messages in my posts to get Tabuu to add me in the story mwahahahaha wow i'm so bad at evil laughs)
 
I'm not going to push you to make me a character but I would like it.

Anyway, good chapter. I don't really like the "Anton joined the party!" thing as it sounds corny but it luckily it doesn't happen too often. There's not much to say as it was an intro chapter but it was well written.
 
The X joined the party! thing is kind of a running gag. Remember when Pantaro joined up?

Hm.

For some reason, this thread makes me want to put Javelin in the story.
 
The story is like an RPG, really.

Part 1
Mini-boss: Pantaro
Mini-boss: Rudnicki
Boss: Murzon

Part 2
Mini-boss: ?
Mini-boss: ?
Mini-boss: ?
Mini-boss: ?
Mini-boss: ?
Boss: ?

Part 3
Mini-boss: ?
Mini-boss: ?
Final Boss: ?

Also note how Murzon was taken on by an entire team- like in an RPG. Battles like that will be frequent in this story.