New Sherlock Mario Book 1:The Case of the Toxic Donut

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New Super Mario said:
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Mystery in the Snow- 2 (QuizmoManiac, Rocker64)
Case of the Haunted House- 1 (Mr bones)
Secrets of the Lost Tomb- 0
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Fixed. Also i updated the "Lastest Issue" thingy.
 
I think Secrets of the lost tomb is too action movie like (Indiana Jones)
 
New Super Mario said:
Rocker64 said:
New Super Mario said:
Voting Tally:
Mystery in the Snow- 2 (QuizmoManiac, Rocker64)
Case of the Haunted House- 1 (Mr bones)
Secrets of the Lost Tomb- 0
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Fixed. Also i updated the "Lastest Issue" thingy.
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Thanks for the updating
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Your welcome.

And yea quizmo i thought the same thing.
 
New Issue should be coming this week, but might not because I am really busy with a talent show act. I hope so, but probably not wed. or thursday.
 
Here we go, the chapter everybody has been waiting for....... I give you...... Chapter 13!

http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/New_Sherlock_Mario_Book_1:_The_Case_of_the_Toxic_Donut#Trivia
 
Broggy said:
Here we go, the chapter everybody has been waiting for
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What is this again?

Just kidding, pretty good chapter. Obviously UltraMario has put you in a lava lamp.
 
Chapter 15 and Ending. Please make comments about Book 1:

http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/New_Sherlock_Mario_Book_1:_The_Case_of_the_Toxic_Donut
 
Great overall, but I think it needed more suspects, because you were tracking UltraMario for about half the book.