CLUE: The Scottish Mario Play ~ "Piglet, nae!" (A3S3)

Re: CLUE: The Scottish Mario Play ~ Nitpicking welcome! (A2S1 out!)

I apologize, but I'm going to have to delay this for awhile. School begins next week, and I need this weekend to prepare.

Scene 2 will be out Tuesday~Wednesday, followed closely by Scene 3 definitely by the 29th.
 
Re: CLUE: The Scottish Mario Play ~ Nitpicking welcome! (A2S1 out!)

Take as much time as you need.
 
Re: CLUE: The Scottish Mario Play ~ Ding, dong, the Kaiju's dead! (A2S2 released!)

Reviews and criticism welcome.

Per Javelin's criticism, I tried to make Lady Macbeth/Lady MacJav's reason for not killing the king a little more justifiable. Pls tell me if I did a decent job with that.
 
Re: CLUE: The Scottish Mario Play ~ Ding, dong, the Kaiju's dead! (A2S2 released!)

Wouldn't the fact that a javelin was used make it obvious it was Jav who killed me?
 
Re: CLUE: The Scottish Mario Play ~ Ding, dong, the Kaiju's dead! (A2S2 released!)

OMG, this section:
LADY MACJAV:
The attempt and not the deed confounds us. In modern words, to get caught now would be career suicide. Luckily everyone’s sound asleep, I’ve just got to make sure I don’t make a–
[DUNCZILLA rolls over in his sleep, and crushes LADY MACJAV’s wing.]
GYAAAAH! I meant SOOOUUND, gyaaaah’s not a word. Oh my, did I just scream twice? And I’ve dropped my knife somewhere, it must have rolled away! If the princes woke up, I’m done for!
[MCDALCOLM and DONALBLUE, being heavy sleepers, remain dormant.]
Well, lucky me. But I’m pinned beneath ten thousand tonnes of radioactive lizard flesh without my weapon. Eh, could be worse. At least he uses deodorant.
[Enter MACJAV]
MACJAV:
Stop lounging with the stranger in bed and get up! You were supposed to stab the king already.
Was so hilarious, that I couldn't stop laughing for 5 minutes.

GalacticPetey said:
Wouldn't the fact that a javelin was used make it obvious it was Jav who killed me?
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You got to remember, this was before crime scene investigation was invented. So if someones is murdered, no one is going to try to figure out the killer.
 
Re: CLUE: The Scottish Mario Play ~ Ding, dong, the Kaiju's dead! (A2S2 released!)

GalacticPetey said:
Wouldn't the fact that a javelin was used make it obvious it was Jav who killed me?
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it's jav's castle either way. he's got to have a ton of those things lying around. the accused murderers could have just picked up the closest feasible weapon.

edit: apparently i didn't write down how df got out from under dunczilla before switching the scene to the bedroom. remind me to fix that.
 
Re: CLUE: The Scottish Mario Play ~ Ding, dong, the Kaiju's dead! (A2S2 released!)

Next chapter will be out tomorrow or the next day, but in the meantime I made three posters:

MacJav.jpg

LadyMacJav.jpg

20140901004934%21Banquoshi.jpg
 
Re: CLUE: The Scottish Mario Play ~ Ding, dong, the Kaiju's dead! (A2S2 released!)

And I'm Javert said:
Next chapter will be out tomorrow or the next day, but in the meantime I made three posters:

MacJav.jpg

LadyMacJav.jpg

Banquoshi.jpg
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OMG. I am like seriously considering printing these out and putting them on my wall.