Lily Troof: Ace Attorney (Case 2 Chapter 5 is up)

[New Super Mario]

Re: Lily Troof: Ace Attorney (I promise this will get past the teaser)

Sunprius

I expected it.

Really it's supposed to be a form of "super" from my username, with the n added in their for the "new" part.

@Lily:

On the first page you said "Suprius". It's supposed to have an n between the u and the p.

 

[Lily x]

Re: Lily Troof: Ace Attorney (I promise this will get past the teaser)

I will fix it. Also, starting on the case one prolouge. It should be ok as the prosecutor I need doesn't appear until chapter 1. It will be a pretty big prolouge though, a good couple of pages on word.

 

[YoshiMonsta]

Re: Lily Troof: Ace Attorney (I promise this will get past the teaser)

Name: Barry Riles
Age: 42
Gender: Male
Height: 6'1
Role: Rival character, not evil though.
Occupation: Professional detective
Appearance: Gray hair, brown eyes, and a small beard.
Personality: Likes to have the largest say in what is going on.

 

[Lily x]

Re: Lily Troof: Ace Attorney (I promise this will get past the teaser)

We already have a detective.
Also, I'm going to change the prolouge a bit to make it more myserious and not as riddiculously long.

 

[User4042]

Re: Lily Troof: Ace Attorney (I promise this will get past the teaser)

He's a rival prosecuter (sp?), we'll say

 

[Lily x]

Re: Lily Troof: Ace Attorney (I promise this will get past the teaser)

So, YM, would be be willing to change to a prosecutor (You get to be Winston Payne)

 

[YoshiMonsta]

Re: Lily Troof: Ace Attorney (I promise this will get past the teaser)

I'm fine with being a rival prosecutor.

 

[Lily x]

Re: Lily Troof: Ace Attorney (I promise this will get past the teaser)

Excellent. That should be enough to get me going on case one as more might sign up as it goes along. Oh, there will be other characters as well in this who I made up. Hopefully I shoulf be done or near done on the prolouge tommorow.

 

[Lolcrawler]

Re: Lily Troof: Ace Attorney (I promise this will get past the teaser)

Can I be in it? If so

Name: Tom Chalice
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Height: 6'12
Role: IDK
Occupation: IDK
Appearance: a handsome young man who has glossy black hair, and is very muscular
Personality: A charming, but short tempered and aggressive.

 

[Lily x]

Re: Lily Troof: Ace Attorney (I promise this will get past the teaser)

Yeah, sure, but I would prefer it if you specified a role if not I will just put you down as minor.