Eight

Could I be added?

I would like to be a hero, if possible. But if it would make it easier I would be happy as a villain.
 
Thanks. I think your story is really good! I noticed that even your punctuation has improved from part one. Your story plot and character descriptions are great.
 
I'm not going to review now since it says that it will be added upon soon but I have to say on the last part you said Shroobario twice and isn't a bit weird that Zero doesn't interject why he isn't part of this team you mention, I just think maybe an interjection follow by an answer of understanding but this is your story.
 
zackcota said:
Please Submit Here Thank You.

why are you ordering random people to submit their stories and art to you
 
No, sorry. I've had a lot of college work to finish up on, and some of it just can't wait. I'll try and get some of this done over the next few weeks, but I can't really promise anything. I will, however, get most of this story up over Christmas, you can count on that.
 
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