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YoshiMonsta

Yoshi! Yoshi!
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He/him
Could I be added?

I would like to be a hero, if possible. But if it would make it easier I would be happy as a villain.
 

YoshiMonsta

Yoshi! Yoshi!
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He/him
Thanks. I think your story is really good! I noticed that even your punctuation has improved from part one. Your story plot and character descriptions are great.
 

Zero777

Middle Eastern Federation
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He/him
I'm not going to review now since it says that it will be added upon soon but I have to say on the last part you said Shroobario twice and isn't a bit weird that Zero doesn't interject why he isn't part of this team you mention, I just think maybe an interjection follow by an answer of understanding but this is your story.
 

Smasher

Smasher
Forum Moderator
Chat Operator
Awards Committee
Former 'Shroom Staff
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MarioWiki
Smasher
zackcota said:
Please Submit Here Thank You.
why are you ordering random people to submit their stories and art to you
 

General Neptune

Lafayette Quenchingly-McQuaffin
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No, sorry. I've had a lot of college work to finish up on, and some of it just can't wait. I'll try and get some of this done over the next few weeks, but I can't really promise anything. I will, however, get most of this story up over Christmas, you can count on that.
 
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