I'm not going to review now since it says that it will be added upon soon but I have to say on the last part you said Shroobario twice and isn't a bit weird that Zero doesn't interject why he isn't part of this team you mention, I just think maybe an interjection follow by an answer of understanding but this is your story.
No, sorry. I've had a lot of college work to finish up on, and some of it just can't wait. I'll try and get some of this done over the next few weeks, but I can't really promise anything. I will, however, get most of this story up over Christmas, you can count on that.