Enter the Nega *(Hiatus-ized)*

banjonator1

banjonator1

Satan
This is my new fledgling story! My first one actually. I have the main story planned out, but the details are probably going to be a little improv. So that means sign ups for it will switch between accepting and not.

Here are the open slots (seems like only a few for now, but more will open as the story progresses). I can kill of any of these character whenever I choose. After the slots are taken, I shall produce my pilot.

Lead Scientist: PTR
Space Captain: FE
Intern: Smasher
Explosion Managements: Luigi #1
F.O.R.T. Operative: Nabber
Abductee: Toad85
Lesser abductee: Goomba Shoe
Lesser abductee: NSM
TOP SECRET: Pyroguy6
TOP SECRET: GalcticPetey
TOP SECRET: Ultraluigi
If you are unhappy with which name I use for you; contact me!!!
 
Re: Enter the Nega *(Accepting!)*

I'll be anything. Good luck.
 
Re: Enter the Nega *(Accepting!)*

Thanks for signing up guys! Nabber, I'll put you up for something interesting...You guys may not all appear in the first two or so stories, but I swear you will appear in them eventually. The first few will be for getting the plot introduced.
 
Re: Enter the Nega *(Accepting!)*

I guess I'll be the intern.
 
Re: Enter the Nega *(Accepting!)*

Alrighty then! All the necessary jobs have been filled up for me to start working on the first chapter. Its only a pilot though. It'll probably be done by the end of the week. Maybe sooner, maybe later.
 
Re: Enter the Nega *(NOT ACCEPTING)*

You know, I really like your style. It's definitely good. It is a bit redundant at times, and I do feel some more description could be used. But it's a debut prologue and so I do cut some slack. Also, there are a few typos but again, that's okay. I'll give this an 8/10.
 
Re: Enter the Nega *(NOT ACCEPTING)*

Yeah, lower than my own expectations. I promise to do better in the later chapters.

LuigiNo.1 said:
You're right it's short, and I'm only mentioned in one sentence of the prologue. Still good.
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Like I said the first one or two chapters will be for getting the story introduced. You and FE may not appear for a while.