Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Cancelled

[GalacticPetey]

Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) New Whose Who

Nabber you need to resign yourself to the fact that Goomba's Shoe really doesn't care at all about the criticism he recieves.

I'm still half convinced that this entire story is an elaborate trolling setup.

How so?

 

[Kong Rong]

Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) New Whose Who

Nabber you need to resign yourself to the fact that Goomba's Shoe really doesn't care at all about the criticism he recieves.

I'm still half convinced that this entire story is an elaborate trolling setup.

That's not true i just don't care about the opinions of people who know nothing about comic books. Or that review it on the same scale as they would Typical Tragedy

 

[Nabber]

Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) New Whose Who

Nabber you need to resign yourself to the fact that Goomba's Shoe really doesn't care at all about the criticism he recieves.

I'm still half convinced that this entire story is an elaborate trolling setup.

Well of course I've resigned to that.

 

[Kong Rong]

Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) New Whose Who

Nabber you need to resign yourself to the fact that Goomba's Shoe really doesn't care at all about the criticism he recieves.

I'm still half convinced that this entire story is an elaborate trolling setup.

Well of course I've resigned to that.

Nabber let's look at some of you points

I'll change my system. I just won't completely revamp it for you. Let's take this one flaw at a time. Please explain why I should excuse your horrible grammar.

You shouldn't that's a valid point

Next; is there an actual plot here?

No there isn't one main plot comic books are set up to have multiple little plots.

Now, how come you can't put backstory in the actual story?

That comes from the amount of characters in the story since most good superhero back stories tend to be the main point of a chapter i would need to write 8 chapters revolving around there back stories. Now that doesn't mean i don't plan on exploring them more since i do i just thought it would be quicker and more effective to explain them all at once rather than was a whole volume on just back stories. It also serves as a nod to DC comic books who also had these backstory chapters (though theres were featured as a page in a comic book)

How come you have to have whole chapters where you break the fourth wall to tell us who is who?

That ones mostly for humor although to tell you the truth i don't think Ambush is telling the back stories i think he introduces them than a flash back happens.

Because you randomly make up these back stories on the spot, they have nothing to do with the actual story and so they are effectively pointless.

While it is true i have created back stories on the spot (mainly Pyro's, TPY's, and Air Mario's) most of the stuff i write is not made up on the spot and the stuff i do make up on the spot is usually pretty good in my opinion (writer bias FTW)

Now, a general question: besides having teleportation, does Ambush Shoe have any other powers?

As a joke he can hold objects as Tom pointed out but other than that nothing

 

[Kong Rong]

Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) On Hiatus until March

Note this is now on Hiatus until at least March

 

[Nabber]

Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) On Hiatus until March

Why?

 

[Kong Rong]

Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) On Hiatus until March

Mostly for finals

 

[Contra(dictory)]

Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) On Hiatus until March

I have no comment.

You should really listen to Nab and Jav- they're making very valid points, and you're just sort of brushing it off. You clearly don't seek to improve, which is why I'm not giving you a review.

You don't deserve it.

 

[Kong Rong]

Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) On Hiatus until March

I have no comment.

You should really listen to Nab and Jav- they're making very valid points, and you're just sort of brushing it off. You clearly don't seek to improve, which is why I'm not giving you a review.

You don't deserve it.

 

[Nabber]

Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) On Hiatus until March

I have no comment.

You should really listen to Nab and Jav- they're making very valid points, and you're just sort of brushing it off. You clearly don't seek to improve, which is why I'm not giving you a review.

You don't deserve it.

Aww. I wanted you to give this one of your Tabuu Reviews.

 

[Kong Rong]

Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) On Hiatus until March

I have no comment.

You should really listen to Nab and Jav- they're making very valid points, and you're just sort of brushing it off. You clearly don't seek to improve, which is why I'm not giving you a review.

You don't deserve it.

Aww. I wanted you to give this one of your Tabuu Reviews.

I am the true winner of this conversation