Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Cancelled

Do you think i should start writing this again

  • Yes

    Votes: 5 62.5%

  • No

    Votes: 1 12.5%

  • I don't care

    Votes: 2 25.0%
  • Total voters
    8
  • Poll closed .
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Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Second chapter has been released

Toad2012 said:
Lips said:
Toad2012 said:
This chapter is good.
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What did you like about it
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You keep asking that.

I guess I like your writing style the most.
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I ask because i enjoy feedback (unless it's negative feedback than your a nazi and i hate you :P :posh:)
 
Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Second chapter has been released

I think it was okay, but you have to hit the enter key when finishing a quote.
 
Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Second chapter has been released

Luciano Bradley said:
I think it was okay, but you have to hit the enter key when finishing a quote.
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That would've helped. It was kinda hard to read.
 
Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Second chapter has been released

Luciano Bradley said:
I think it was okay, but you have to hit the enter key when finishing a quote.
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No
 
Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Second chapter has been released

You should learn to take constructive criticism.

Anyway, this chapter was... well, I guess it's interesting but poorly written. For one thing, you have dialogue in the same paragraph. Never do that. Next, you have people talking without any quotation marks to show that they're talking. The writing itself is confusing, filled with jokes that only you understand. The characters are unrealistic and WHY THE HELL DOES EVERYONE HAVE A SUPERPOWER BUT ME??? Anyway, back to the point. This chapter was confusing. I rate it meh.
 
Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Second chapter has been released

I have people talking without quotations? And of course i have jokes only i would understand its my story (speaking of which what were said jokes)
 
Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Second chapter has been released

Why are you resisting the criticism? This is helping you to become better.
 
Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Second chapter has been released

This chapter was quite an interesting one, and I am looking foward to how things shape up later in the story.

Your story ideas are interesting and unique as I'll give you that as a compliment. The only issue is just the writing style; however, if that is fixed up I believe your story will be a really great one. ;) The style you have currently is not bad; however, I believe everyone is just recommending a slight change to make it more easier on the eyes. Just a thought for further editing.

If you need another back up editor, I am more than happy to help at times.
 
Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Second chapter has been released

Your hired!
 
Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Second chapter has been released

Now you're ignoring us >_>
Oh well, we tried...
 
Re: Suicide League (Superhero fan story) Second chapter has been released

^Oh, I'm not trying to replace anyone. :-[ I just made a suggestion to be a back up editor if needed (since he said his previous editors left before). I'll only edit if needed to.