Nintendoobsessed
Spiny
The experiment is now over! I decided to see what would happen if I took the role of a young child writing a story. As you can see from reading this thread, never EVER let a younger child come here and write a story. Some will flame at you, and pay moderators to threaten you if you try to defend yourself. I'm going to work on my real story now. Just wanted to see how kind this forum would be to a young child. Thank you for the experiance!
STOKAL
based on a true life story
Part 1
By Nintendoobsessed
It was a normal recess, boring. That was, until this single line of kids came walking towards me. Thay were in age order and came up to me. Something was wrong. They looked like they were crontrolled by something. Um, hi. I said. The front girl stared at me. None of them said anything. I walked away, as I watched them from a distance. They just continued walking. Later that day, I talked with James, a sometimes friend, sometimes jerk. He didnt belive me though. At second recces, I stayed inside and went to the office. I was going to ask if they had seen anybody like that in thier files. Mrs. Ball told me to sit down. She then dissapeard in a office room. It was a long time before she returned. Finally, she came out. She grabbed me pulled me into the office, and tied me to a chair. You know too much., said Mrs. Ball glaring. She left the room. I struggled but I couldent get out of the chair. Though, I did manage to fall over. The floor was extremly cold. I got back up, and using extreme pressure, I smashed the chair apart. I would have to explore the office to find out what was going on. I opend a door. No one was there. I snuck in, and grabbed a random computer disk. I had to fid out was was going on. I walked out into the main office area. No one was there. I escaped out of the office, to the buses. There were a small number of kids on the bus. As the bus drove away, I could see a figure out on the playground. It was a kid. When I got home, I ran to my room, took out the disc, locked the door, and inserted the disk( after turning the computer on). A image of a room appeard. A small chair, and a ruby sat on the chair. A terryfing face appeard. UNKnown figure it said. Report to MCP immediatly! What? I said getting scared. Connecting to Mother base it said. That was the school! I quickly turned off the computer.
To be continued...
STOKAL
based on a true life story
Part 1
By Nintendoobsessed
It was a normal recess, boring. That was, until this single line of kids came walking towards me. Thay were in age order and came up to me. Something was wrong. They looked like they were crontrolled by something. Um, hi. I said. The front girl stared at me. None of them said anything. I walked away, as I watched them from a distance. They just continued walking. Later that day, I talked with James, a sometimes friend, sometimes jerk. He didnt belive me though. At second recces, I stayed inside and went to the office. I was going to ask if they had seen anybody like that in thier files. Mrs. Ball told me to sit down. She then dissapeard in a office room. It was a long time before she returned. Finally, she came out. She grabbed me pulled me into the office, and tied me to a chair. You know too much., said Mrs. Ball glaring. She left the room. I struggled but I couldent get out of the chair. Though, I did manage to fall over. The floor was extremly cold. I got back up, and using extreme pressure, I smashed the chair apart. I would have to explore the office to find out what was going on. I opend a door. No one was there. I snuck in, and grabbed a random computer disk. I had to fid out was was going on. I walked out into the main office area. No one was there. I escaped out of the office, to the buses. There were a small number of kids on the bus. As the bus drove away, I could see a figure out on the playground. It was a kid. When I got home, I ran to my room, took out the disc, locked the door, and inserted the disk( after turning the computer on). A image of a room appeard. A small chair, and a ruby sat on the chair. A terryfing face appeard. UNKnown figure it said. Report to MCP immediatly! What? I said getting scared. Connecting to Mother base it said. That was the school! I quickly turned off the computer.
To be continued...
