Dimensions

Sounds okay, the prologue is alright, but I got to read more to see if it is good.
 
It's longer than the first. :P I wrote and I'll find time to type it. I need two more main villans!
 
You'll just have to do with the ones you have. I don't think this story is suddenly going to become more popular.
 
You really don't need all the major spots filled up before you make the first chapter. And if it's good, it will make people want to sign up.