The missing Yoshi Kids-A Fan Fiction by Paper Jorge!

You can post here if it's a good Fan Fiction or something.

Did anyone even read my Fan Fiction?
 
I did. Not bad, but you really should start a new paragraph every time a character says something. And maybe try and use some more descriptions.
 
You really like those smiley icons :D . I like it.
 
As I said before this story is probably going to continue in two weeks.
 
Paper Jorge said:
As I said before this story is probably going to continue in two weeks.

"one year later....."
 
how come this stopped? It sounded really good
 
Not bad, its about time you started writing this.
 
Paper Jorge said:
Everything is FTW for you....

Everything IS FTW man...
 
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