The missing Yoshi Kids-A Fan Fiction by Paper Jorge!

Paper Jorge

who? am? I?
You can post here if it's a good Fan Fiction or something.

Did anyone even read my Fan Fiction?
 

Phoenix Rider

Luma
Retired Wiki Staff
I did. Not bad, but you really should start a new paragraph every time a character says something. And maybe try and use some more descriptions.
 
You really like those smiley icons :D . I like it.
 

Paper Jorge

who? am? I?
As I said before this story is probably going to continue in two weeks.
 
Paper Jorge said:
As I said before this story is probably going to continue in two weeks.
"one year later....."
 

Xzelion

Join us in the shadows where we stand vigilant...
Retired Wiki Staff
how come this stopped? It sounded really good
 

Xzelion

Join us in the shadows where we stand vigilant...
Retired Wiki Staff
Not bad, its about time you started writing this.
 

Xzelion

Join us in the shadows where we stand vigilant...
Retired Wiki Staff
Paper Jorge said:
Everything is FTW for you....
Everything IS FTW man...
 
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