The missing Yoshi Kids-A Fan Fiction by Paper Jorge!

Paper Jorge · Nov 17, 2006

EDIT: removed because of how lame it was

Paper Jorge · Nov 17, 2006

You can post here if it's a good Fan Fiction or something.

Did anyone even read my Fan Fiction?

Phoenix Rider · Nov 18, 2006

I did. Not bad, but you really should start a new paragraph every time a character says something. And maybe try and use some more descriptions.

Paper Jorge · Nov 18, 2006

Ok, Monty.

ultimatetoad · Nov 21, 2006

You really like those smiley icons :D . I like it.

Paper Jorge · Nov 29, 2006

As I said before this story is probably going to continue in two weeks.

Phoenix Rider · Mar 13, 2007

I want to keep reading it, PJ.

ultimatetoad · Apr 13, 2007

Paper Jorge said:
As I said before this story is probably going to continue in two weeks.

"one year later....."

Xzelion · Apr 20, 2007

how come this stopped? It sounded really good

ultimatetoad · Apr 25, 2007

PJ has commitment problems..... (j/k PJ)

Plumber · May 7, 2007

Let's nag him to start it up again.

ultimatetoad · May 7, 2007

Let's.....

Blitzwing · May 7, 2007

not post until he evantually write the next chapter.

Plumber · May 8, 2007

No, then this will be forgotten.