SiFi buys a haunted mansion

[SiFi]

 

[Jesus Freak]

That was ok, I guess.

 

[Nerdy Guy]

Actually alot better then I thought. The comic made sense and reminded me a little of Newspaper comics. You're actually kinda funny when you're not so purposely hyper and arguementive all the time.

 

[Garlic Man]

It took me a second to realize that the ghost was the guy.

 

[SiFi]

It took me a second to realize that the ghost was the guy.

SORRY

 

[Lario]

That comic was a brief summary of nearly every video game protagonist.

 

[Uniju]

It's hard to tell what's going on. You didn't really make proper use of backgrounds, and the sprites were... Mediocre. The story itself is also lacking, being poorly thought-out and simple, not to mention it's hardly even begun by the end of the comic. It's really not long enough to get into any real plot, but you attempted anyway to advance towards a story and in the process it became silly and forced.

 

[Garlic Man]

Also, in panels 3, 4, and 5, your foot is sticking through the stone floor.

 

[Lario]

I'm sure nobody else cares, though.

I'll give the comic a 6/10.

 

[SiFi]

 

[Garlic Man]

I like this one better.

 

[SiFi]

I like this one better.

BUT I MADE PANELS 2-4 TO SPITE YOU.

 

[Lario]

That was better than the first one.

I'll give it a 7/10.