SiFi buys a haunted mansion

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Nerdy Guy

Guest
Actually alot better then I thought. The comic made sense and reminded me a little of Newspaper comics. You're actually kinda funny when you're not so purposely hyper and arguementive all the time. :)
 

Garlic Man

Name-change free since 2018
It took me a second to realize that the ghost was the guy.
 

Uniju

Hazukashii serifu kinshi
It's hard to tell what's going on. You didn't really make proper use of backgrounds, and the sprites were... Mediocre. The story itself is also lacking, being poorly thought-out and simple, not to mention it's hardly even begun by the end of the comic. It's really not long enough to get into any real plot, but you attempted anyway to advance towards a story and in the process it became silly and forced.
 

Garlic Man

Name-change free since 2018
Also, in panels 3, 4, and 5, your foot is sticking through the stone floor.
 

Garlic Man

Name-change free since 2018
I like this one better.
 

Garlic Man

Name-change free since 2018

SiFi

Benjamin Judd


My original response to seeing the ghost was going to be much more vulgar, but I made the comic in school.

And yes, of all the things in this comic, THAT'S the one I take time to explain.
 

SiFi

Benjamin Judd
I've suddenly gained the heart to explain something.

SiFi doesn't have legs in panels 4-6 because there weren't any sprites of him in fetal position.
 

SiFi

Benjamin Judd
I decided to give you a bigger comic.



STAY TUNED FOR THE EXCITING CONCLUSION
 

Garlic Man

Name-change free since 2018
T-REX said:
I've suddenly gained the heart to explain something.

SiFi doesn't have legs in panels 4-6 because there weren't any sprites of him in fetal position.
So now not only are his feet stuck in the ground, his whole lower body is.
 

Lario

Seems so long ago.
The Nostalgia Critic comes to mind, and for one reason only...

Just guess. You'll know the answer if you're a fan.
 

SiFi

Benjamin Judd
Ugozima's Rival said:
The Nostalgia Critic comes to mind, and for one reason only...

Just guess. You'll know the answer if you're a fan.
IT COULD BE ANYTHING
 
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Nerdy Guy

Guest
Ugozima's Rival said:
The Nostalgia Critic comes to mind, and for one reason only...

Just guess. You'll know the answer if you're a fan.
Nostalgia Critic fans aren't the only people who know what a Big Lipped Aligator Moment is, Lario. :P
 
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