SiFi buys a haunted mansion

SiFi

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SiFi
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Actually alot better then I thought. The comic made sense and reminded me a little of Newspaper comics. You're actually kinda funny when you're not so purposely hyper and arguementive all the time. :)
 
It took me a second to realize that the ghost was the guy.
 
Kinniku Man said:
It took me a second to realize that the ghost was the guy.
SORRY :(
 
It's hard to tell what's going on. You didn't really make proper use of backgrounds, and the sprites were... Mediocre. The story itself is also lacking, being poorly thought-out and simple, not to mention it's hardly even begun by the end of the comic. It's really not long enough to get into any real plot, but you attempted anyway to advance towards a story and in the process it became silly and forced.
 
Also, in panels 3, 4, and 5, your foot is sticking through the stone floor.
 
I like this one better.
 
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My original response to seeing the ghost was going to be much more vulgar, but I made the comic in school.

And yes, of all the things in this comic, THAT'S the one I take time to explain.
 
I've suddenly gained the heart to explain something.

SiFi doesn't have legs in panels 4-6 because there weren't any sprites of him in fetal position.
 
I decided to give you a bigger comic.

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STAY TUNED FOR THE EXCITING CONCLUSION
 
T-REX said:
I've suddenly gained the heart to explain something.

SiFi doesn't have legs in panels 4-6 because there weren't any sprites of him in fetal position.
So now not only are his feet stuck in the ground, his whole lower body is.
 
The Nostalgia Critic comes to mind, and for one reason only...

Just guess. You'll know the answer if you're a fan.
 
Ugozima's Rival said:
The Nostalgia Critic comes to mind, and for one reason only...

Just guess. You'll know the answer if you're a fan.
IT COULD BE ANYTHING
 
Ugozima's Rival said:
The Nostalgia Critic comes to mind, and for one reason only...

Just guess. You'll know the answer if you're a fan.
Nostalgia Critic fans aren't the only people who know what a Big Lipped Aligator Moment is, Lario. :P
 
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