Ralph's Odyssey

[ralphfan]

This is my first successful fanfic. Please read, review, and discuss. Thanks!

 

[Nerdy Guy]

There were some Didn't Do The Research moments like how your edits helped you get promoted, since the ammount of edits aren't the main reason you get promoted on the real wiki. You need to have a good character, commited to the job, have the sysops think you're ready for the job, etc. Also, I found some parts to be slightly self-centered. Other then that, it was pretty good.

 

[ralphfan]

Chapter III is coming out today!

Here are the chapters to this point:

Prologue
Chapter I: The Gathering Storm
Chapter II: Uncivil War
Chapter III: Triumph and Tragedy

 

[Garlic Man]

There were some Didn't Do The Research moments like how your edits helped you get promoted, since the ammount of edits aren't the main reason you get promoted on the real wiki. You need to have a good character, commited to the job, have the sysops think you're ready for the job, etc. Also, I found some parts to be slightly self-centered. Other then that, it was pretty good.

True, and they also need to have good grammar.

 

[ralphfan]

Yes, like me.

 

[Lario]

The best fan fiction on Userpedia, primarily because it's the only one I've read.

Also, I can't wait until I appear as a not-so nice person.

 

[ralphfan]

I need more info on you to include you. You should go on chat sometime.

 

[Lario]

Too bad that, even with Java, my computer can't make chats work.

 

[ralphfan]

Try darkymst.org.

 

[Aiko Heiwa]

^That's what NG uses

 

[Garlic Man]

I'm not in the story? Aw...

 

[Lario]

I'm sure you can still sign up.

Also, I'd prefer private messages over chatting...

 

[Super Mario Bros.]

I like the story, Ralph.

Some things seem a bit odd, though. Don't shoot me for saying this, but I think you may be going a bit overboard with trying to include adult-content.

 

[Lario]

That's what the crackpot people want...

And yet, they're like, what, around my age?

 

[Nerdy Guy]

Ralph's trying too hard to include it though. Plus no one really asked him to put it in.

 

[Lario]

Too bad they wanted it without asking it directly.

 

[Nerdy Guy]

...

Wait, what?

 

[Aiko Heiwa]

Chap III legalized pot, f yeah seaking.

 

[Super Mario Bros.]

Chap III legalized pot, f yeah seaking.

Lol.



By the way, Ralph, I'm not saying for you to refrain from adding that content in there, but I suggest limiting it a bit.

 

[Garlic Man]

I haven't read a lot of it, but what are examples of "adult content"?

 

[ralphfan]

Profanity, sex, etc.

 

[ralphfan]

Chapter IV is here!

Click here for the full version!

I removed it. Lock this thread.