I'm Starting A Luigi Fanfiction Series!

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Yep, I'm working on fanfiction starring Luigi through adventures both within and outside of the Mushroom Kingdom. I'll be posting some of these stories here. Additionally, if you want to suggest ideas, feel free to do so. However, rules for idea suggestions are that it must be kept family friendly, so no gore, profanity, inappropriate content, etc. Here's the first part of my first story called "Detective Luigi":
Narrator: Larry Koopa is insanely sneaky. He'll be in one spot, then disappear in a flash. Now here's the thing, his stealth stems from his greed. He loves treasure, gold, money, valuables, etc. You name it, he steals it. In fact, one time his greed framed Toadsworth. Let me tell you the story. It started when Princess Peach invited Mario, Luigi, Toad, and Toadette to come with her to Bob-omb Battlefield, where she was visiting her old steward, Toadsworth.
Princess Peach: Thank you so much for accompanying me! It's been so long since I've seen Toadsworth!
Mario: No problem-a, Princess. We love going on adventures with you.
Toad: Certainly! Right, Toadette?
Toadette: Of course, Toad!
Luigi: Wow, this place is-a huge! And it is certainly a battlefield! (thinks) Mama mia, I hope-a no battles are-a taking-a-place right now!
Narrator: They finally made it to the castle on top of Bob-omb Battlefield's mountain, which is where Toadsworth worked for its ruler, King Bob-omb. He had certainly been a little explosive in the past, but Toadsworth had helped to reform him into a much kinder and fair ruler, to the thanks of the Bob-omb buddies, who he now ruled instead of the evil Bob-ombs who worked for Bowser. Unbeknownest to them, Larry Koopa had snuck into the back of the castle and stolen a super crown, one of King Bob-omb's finest collectibles. Worst of all, he had donned a disguise to make himself look like Toadsworth so that the security cameras would catch that.
Princess Peach: (runs to embrace him) Toadsworth!
Toadsworth: Peach, my dear, how wonderful it is to see you!
Mario: Nice to see you again, Toadsworth.
Toadsworth: You as well, Master Mario. Are you taking good care of the princess?
Mario: Of course I am!
Toadsworth: And Master Luigi, what a pleasure to see you as well.
Luigi: Indeed, Toadsworth.
Toadsworth: Wonderful! Now, come on, his majesty wanted us to come in and enjoy a nice lunch with him!
Princess Peach: Lead the way, Toadsworth!
Narrator: But what was about to happen no one could have expected. As soon as they went into the throne room, King Bob-omb ordered him to be thrown into prison.
Toadsworth: What for?!
King Bob-omb: You stole my super crown, and I have the evidence right here!
Narrator: King Bob-omb played the security footage on a monitor in the room and it seemed unbelievably obvious. So, Toadsworth was taken away to prison, and the rest of the Mushroom Kingdom's folk were sent outside. Princess Peach was undoubtedly upset about the situation.
Princess Peach: (pacing) I can't believe he'd do something like that!
Toad: Princess, are you sure he would do that?
Princess Peach: (cries) It's right there, on video, clear as crystal! He took the super crown! How could he? I'm never talking to him again!
Mario: Princess, you seem really upset. How about I get you some tea to calm your nerves?
Princess Peach: (calms down) Okay, Mario. I'll have some tea. I saw a nice cafe near here on our ride. Why don't we stop there?
Toad: I'll come with you guys!
Mario: Luigi, you-a want to a-come?
Luigi: That's-a alright, Mario! I don't like tea a-very much. You go ahead. I'll stay here.
Mario: Okie dokie.
Narrator: Mario, Princess Peach, and Toad left to go to the cafe. But Luigi stayed behind. Toadette initially followed them to go to the cafe, but then she went back to the green clad plumber.
Toadette: Luigi, are you okay?
Luigi: Something seemed off about that-a video, and I'm positive Toadsworth would never do anything like that. Toadette, I'm-a going to investigate.
Toadette: Well, then I'm coming with you! We'll be detectives!
Luigi: Ah, yes. Detective Luigi. It's-a got a nice ring to it. And you'll be Junior Detective Toadette.
Toadette: Yay!
Narrator: To be continued.
 
Here is part 2 of Detective Luigi!
Narrator: The first step in Luigi's investigation was to review that video caught on the security footage. The only way to do that was to ask King Bob-omb if they could. Toadette initially didn't think he'd let them, but to her surprise he did. Luigi loaded it up onto a computer located in the castle, and after seeing the footage from before, he and Toadette watched an additional three minutes, that of which were quite revealing. It showed that Larry Koopa had been disguised as Toadsworth, in the moment in which he had thought it was safe to take off the mask.
Luigi: Of course! Larry Koopa stole the-a super crown, not Toadsworth! I knew our old friend-a wasn't guilty!
Toadette: Should we show King Bob-omb the extended footage?
Luigi: (sighs) It won't-a be enough to get Toadsworth out of prison. But-a getting the Super Crown back will!
Toadette: Okay, I guess. I mean, I don't understand how valuable this Super Crown could be. I mean, I've found them all the time back in the Mushroom Kingdom. However, if it'll help Toadsworth, I'll do it!
Luigi: (confidently) Alright then. Looks like we have to-a pay a visit to his tower in Sparkling-a Waters.
Narrator: Meanwhile, Mario, Toad, and Princess Peach were at the cafe, trying to enjoy some tea and cookies. Princess Peach's nerves were calmed, but she was still very much heartbroken. She couldn't believe Toadsworth, her formerly faithful steward, would be dishonest and steal someone's collector's item. Mario tried his very best to comfort her.
Mario: (warmly) Princess, I know you're-a distraught. I can totally understand-a that. Do you want to-a talk about it?
Narrator: Princess Peach took a sip of her tea, and then immediately, as tears fell from her eyes like that of a waterfall, she poured out her feelings to Mario.
Princess Peach: (crying) I just don't understand! What happened? I thought he was always a good guy!
Mario: Oh, Princess. I'm-a so sorry. Is there anything I can-a do to help?
Princess Peach: I wish there was, but there isn't!
Narrator: Just then, Toad came up to them after getting some more cookies for them to share.
Toad: Hey, guys. I know Luigi wasn't coming, but Toadette was supposed to come with us and she's not here.
Mario: (matter of factly) She must have stayed back with-a Luigi. Perhaps she wanted to-a keep him company.
Narrator: Princess Peach was crying like there was no tomorrow. And she still kept the stand of never talking to him again. Mario gave her a hug, and Toad offered her some more cookies. But it seemed as if nothing could comfort the princess. Unless Luigi and Toadette could clear Toadsworth's name. To be continued.
 
This is really good so far!! 😎 Cant wait for part 3!!! (Suggestion: Add the other Koopalings)
 
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