MarioWiki Saga: The Conclusion (Part 5/5, it's finished)

Was the comic alright?

  • Yeah, it was good.

    Votes: 2 28.6%
  • It had good parts and bad parts.

    Votes: 2 28.6%
  • It wasn't very good.

    Votes: 3 42.9%

  • Total voters
    7

Shinta

Uh, Ken. Role.
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

I'm not signing up until they're open, but remember: :porple: is only the PorpleBot. This is the real Porple.

Hoping it turns out well for you. See ya at signups!
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

PorpleBot's talk sprite. I plan to incorporate Blue Bowser Porple as a "final form" transformation, so that version's in as well.
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories (sign ups starting soon) (plz read)

Prologue for Saga;

This is a place for the outcasts.

Many species arrive here, yet are only known as "trolls" to the outside.

Some have not even witnessed their own creation, yet are sent here to rot.

Whoever we are, wherever we came from, we all suffered the same fate.

Why we had to build our own community instead of live happily in theirs, I do not know.

I am the first "troll", and I was the first to be sent to this world. I have been stuck here for ten years, yet the population only rises and never has a "troll" been let back into their world.

Today is the day that will change.
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories (sign ups starting soon)

It's on UP! Check it out there for a more organized approach, but here's a preview image of the opening chapter of the Stories segment.



The link is here.
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories (sign ups starting soon)

Alright. I know what I'm doing now, so I'm opening sign ups for the Saga series until the 23rd February, or until I reach 15 sign ups. There will also be a cast list of users that I will be putting in anyway, so make sure that you're not on any of the lists before posting a message here. Like last time, anyone who likes or posts here will automatically receive a cameo or guest appearance in any of the series. So just post a message here if you're interested, and I'll try my best to represent you in my story. Also, if you have multiple OC designs, please tell me which one you want put in.
 

Pikman

Can't beat Rainbow Ride
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories (sign ups open, 7 days remain!)

Honestly, I'm interested in being a cameo appearance. You can even use my avatar, if you want.
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories (sign ups open, 7 days remain!)

Okay, you two are added in. Saga update this weekend, and a Story update if I can finish the panels.
 

Viper26

King Bowser
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories (sign ups open until 23/2 (or 2/23)!)

Ill sign up for both saga and story
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories (sign ups open until 23/2 (or 2/23)!)

here's another chapter yay

Enjoy!

And, uh, here's a preview image.


E: I forgot that my "O"C doesn't wear a belt but oh well.
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories (sign ups open until 23/2 (or 2/23)!)

Picture update;
 

Walkazo

Thou liest!
Wiki Bureaucrat
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories (sign ups open until 23/2 (or 2/23)!)

Nice touch using his actual first edit.
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

Okay, so that's the end of the sign up period. I guess it's good to have a smaller cast, as I can focus more on a character-based plot, rather than no development for a character.

P.S. there's no guarantee that any of you make it through to the end without dying (aka being permablocked). There's also a thing I'm working on where you can choose a path from a single page, which will eventually lead back to the starting page, and from there you can read the other path. Basically, this.

Picture update;
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

I've spent the last hour or two creating most of the talk sprites, so here's all but four of them.




May redo Anton.




 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

Wooow BB Code is not good for talk boxes. Click here for a more organized version.


You wish to know why you are here.
Yes.

We need a user. You happened to be the first one we could get.
And why am I "need"ed?

We need someone to create this contraption, and the building blocks of this machine is in your world.
No.
No...?
This project cannot be completed by one user! It would take a whole group to complete this, and a group of formidable skill too.


Fine.
You may go back to your world of the free and bring some competent users BACK HERE; they must be unaware of my plans, and you are to see to that.
What if I decide to bring back an army to stop you?
I'll be watching.

You're not the only one with knowledge of technology. These two are under my control, and as you may know, are armed to the teeth with Nukes. And if you cross me...

I will personally see to the destruction of the universe.


aggghh thats the whole population of banland
on a meteor
please say somebodies online wait no its just me
i guess it's also just my luck heehee

welp time to do the responsible thing
User talk:proplemontage
porpel
PORPLEMONTAGE

first try

okay that should help

Is this everybody?
Everyone online. But that's only us.

Guess it'll have to do then.
 

Anton

kero?
Chat Administrator
Core 'Shroom Staff
Awards Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

omg i'm so cute <333

also the story looks interesting so far; I'm looking forward to it continuing!
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

Tomorrow will be an update for MarioWiki Stories, so check back here through the weekend to see the finished chapter!

Here's a picture;

 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

Here we go.
I think text narration is the best way to explain what's going on, so I'll save major dialogue points for Saga.

On the second of September, 2005...


Just another article is being created.




While Itinerant Phantoms may roam, and vandals are en masse, something more tangible is here.



The fourth one has arrived.




While weapons can delay the enemy...



Only a certain type of weapon can vanquish.




But the vanquished still need a home.


Nice work.

But there will only be more.
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

Sorry to say that I can't get a full chapter out this Sunday. I'm away for the entire weekend and Friday, and I've only got a couple of pages ready; it's not enough for an entire chapter yet. In the meanwhile, I'll make up for it by trying to release chapters faster.

Another thing of note is this small series in which Roy Koopa (and anyone else who asks) can review any of the current chapters, and I'll post it on UP. Click here to see what he thought of MarioWiki Saga's Chapter 1.
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

>quadruple posting


get ready
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

Someone else post pls
Just give up. You can't defend this world forever.
One of these days you'll stop, and then we will remove you from your pathetic existence. This battle has lasted for over a decade, and I know you can't survive forever.
Prove it.

stop
jdhfjfjd i can just undo your vandalism you know. stop spamming!
Hey! C'mere! I need your, uh, help, with... something.
...sure.
What do you need us to do?
There's a few supplies this way, in the deletion archives. I know a way to, claim... victory for this battle.
Zzz-HIC

...

What now...
Later...
See? Your soulless puppets are nothing but a stain on our block logs, your damage has been reverted and there is nothing you can do to stop us. You've made your mistake coming here directly; you will pay the price and fight us.
Fight you? Why would I do that...
It's um, in here somewhere... the thing, I mean...
Guys?
*snip*
BONK
...when I have control over your own friends?
 

Walkazo

Thou liest!
Wiki Bureaucrat
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

If you don't want multi-posts, I suggest only post actual chapters. The previews are just confusing without context, so there's not much to say about them, and then when the full chapter comes, we already saw a lot of the content, and so, have less reason to jump up and say "cool pic/sprites/etc." The previews and wheedling for comments can also easily seem more like fishing for attention than anything else, which people will be less likely to respond to. In general, never write stories for the feedback - it will just leave you disappointed.

Anyway, as for the chapter itself, it was cool to see some more characters: makes me nostalgic for Dragon Problem, lol. At first I was going to complain about rookie users being present so early on, but then I remembered that "Stories" is the fact-based one and "Saga" is the fictional story set in the present, which was obvious in hindsight due to the troll planet being there and whatnot, whoopsie.
 

Ice Cream Man

And It Don't Stop
Core 'Shroom Staff
Poll Committee
Re: MarioWiki: Saga and MarioWiki: Stories

Doing another Saga chapter because I'm exited about this chapter.


Get that troll!
How noble, charging into battle without thinking.
I mean, did you really think that I was unarmed?

It's interesting to see how fast your people can work when under the influence of one of my Bots.
It took a long time to plan, but about an hour to create.

I only needed one thing from you.

I believe it is called a "Sysword". Either way, I got one. Thanks!
Now this weapon is complete, I would advise that you step back and let m-

We don't care.

WE'LL KILL YOU ANYWAY!
Fire it.



ha

ha ha ha ha haa

KYEH HEH HEH HEH!
MEET THE LATEST PROPRIETOR!

what a dilemma!!!
 
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