my first comic

[yoshster]

This is my first comic, i plan on making more in the series if u guys give it thumbs up

to view it proparly u may need to download it and set the viewing range/zoom to 100%, but after that u will see it fine

 

[[ohgodpleasedelete]]

Not readable and there is WAY too much space.

 

[crystalking]

not readable

 

[yoshster]

Fixed it

 

[[ohgodpleasedelete]]

Fixed it

Pretty bad.

You practically stole Peachypie 3.14's sprites. >_>

And the outlines are REALLY bad...

And the plot makes no sense...

No speech bubbles...

So pretty good for a first comic. XD

Just kidding.
Not very good.

 

[crystalking]

Fixed it

Pretty bad.

You practically stole Peachypie 3.14's sprites. >_>

And the outlines are REALLY bad...

And the plot makes no sense...

No speech bubbles...

So pretty good for a first comic. XD

Just kidding.
Not very good.

I agree with CN

no offense

 

[yoshster]

I wanted to make the "thing" that fell and the"master" a mystery so the plot may not make total sense and well i'll just add speech bubbles nxt time but if
u guys think it stunk so bad then i guess there won't b a nxt time

 

[[ohgodpleasedelete]]

I wanted to make the "thing" that fell and the"master" a mystery so the plot may not make total sense and well i'll just add speech bubbles nxt time but if
u guys think it stunk so bad then i guess there won't b a nxt time

It can be mysterious and still make sense.

Take the Shadow Chronicles for an example.

 

[crystalking]

At least I said no offense

 

[Guiliant]

Sucks.

 

[Storm Yoshi]

I wanted to make the "thing" that fell and the"master" a mystery so the plot may not make total sense and well i'll just add speech bubbles nxt time but if
u guys think it stunk so bad then i guess there won't b a nxt time

It can be mysterious and still make sense.

Take the Shadow Chronicles for an example.

That is true CN.

 

[Dry Bones]

You stole Peachycakes3.14's sprites.....

 

[yoshster]

UMM i made some changes even though i doubt it would be