Storm Yoshi
Cyclone Microsoft, it'll make your windows crash
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ok and thats the plot so far! And this only my 4th comic! The other 3 were the 2 SSB ones and the first one of this series.ChaosNinji said:Not that good, I must say. I find the plot to be lacking. Also, I wouldn't make a new thread for each comic. Just edit your old one. Seriously.
Ummm... I found the other ones to be bad, also.Super Yoshi10 said:ok and thats the plot so far! And this only my 4th comic! The other 3 were the 2 SSB ones and the first one of this series.ChaosNinji said:Not that good, I must say. I find the plot to be lacking. Also, I wouldn't make a new thread for each comic. Just edit your old one. Seriously.
I save the world.ChaosNinji said:Ummm... I found the other ones to be bad, also.Super Yoshi10 said:ok and thats the plot so far! And this only my 4th comic! The other 3 were the 2 SSB ones and the first one of this series.ChaosNinji said:Not that good, I must say. I find the plot to be lacking. Also, I wouldn't make a new thread for each comic. Just edit your old one. Seriously.
ANNOUNCMENT: MY NONEXSISTENT COMIC WILL STAY THAT WAY UNTIL I THINK OF A PLOT.
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Um you can't see them properly but there mushrooms on black bottles with corks I should've made them red. I can make comics but i just never get good ideas.Dodoman said:Serious issues with this comic (to name a few):
*Hammer's Bro's blue text is barely legible.
*Hammer Bro says "Let's get the potions!" And so, they grab mushrooms. >_>
*Bowser is doing what in the last panel? Just floating around?
There gonna kill everyone but after these non-constructive criticsism comments I'm not continuing itSmiddle said:I don't get the plot.
We gave constructive critisism. You just kept saying "It's my 4th time! Cut me some slack."Super Yoshi10 said:There gonna kill everyone but after these non-constructive criticsism comments I'm not continuing itSmiddle said:I don't get the plot.