Who wants their fiction/comic reviewed in The Disconnected?

I would ask him to review Wikiland: Rise of the Prophecy, but only the Prologue is done, and Chapter 1 probably won't come out until December 1st at earliest.
 
Due to the usage of the "Wiki-" prefix and "Prophecy" in that title, I'm doubting that story's quality. No offense.
 
Hey

what would happen if someone predicted something in a prophecy

and it ended up being fake?

That would be awesome.
 
Background:

Tabuu has personally told me he hates stories revolving around prophecies. That is why he can never stomach my first story without mentally barfing.
 
Fi said:
Background:

Tabuu has personally told me he hates stories revolving around prophecies. That is why he can never stomach my first story without mentally barfing.
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Pretty much anyone with literary sense (and some people who don't) hates prophecies. They're one of the oldest freaking cliches around, people need to do something new for once.
 
Dr. Javelin said:
Fi said:
Background:

Tabuu has personally told me he hates stories revolving around prophecies. That is why he can never stomach my first story without mentally barfing.
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Pretty much anyone with literary sense (and some people who don't) hates prophecies. They're one of the oldest freaking cliches around, people need to do something new for once.
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Because that explains why the Zelda franchise is doing SOOOOOOO bad.

But in all seriousness, prophecies are really good plot-makers as long as it is very original. It's not the prophecies itself but how the prophecy is formatted that makes it cliched. Sometimes they make the best stories, as long as you know how to use them. Remember, the more vast the object, the more risk there is at its success.
 
Prophecies can be done right. But when a story completely revolves around it, and God forbid, it makes the main character a messiah figure? Hell no.

And on Userpedia, it typically results in egotistic little shits giving themselves undeserved power in their own stories. Look at me! I joined a week ago, but I'm considered the Wiki's sole hero and I'm perfect and Porplemontage calls me his successor!
 
Don't Fear said:
Due to the usage of the "Wiki-" prefix and "Prophecy" in that title, I'm doubting that story's quality. No offense.
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It was honestly the best I could come up with. And the story actually does not whatsoever revolve around the prophect, it's just telling that there is one. The full contents aren't even known until the third episode which may or may not be made.

Don't Fear said:
Prophecies can be done right. But when a story completely revolves around it, and God forbid, it makes the main character a messiah figure? Hell no.
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Oh god this. That automatically makes for a terrible story. That's also why I didn't even make myself a major character in the story;
I'm even plannig to kill myself off around Chaper 4 so there's no way I can make myself hog too much spotlight.