Wikiland: Chapter Two Released

What did you think of the story so far?


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Re: Wikiland; Episode 1: The Return of the Prophecy

Really the only ones I think are corny are ones that are based on video games, movies, etc.

And cliche plots like this.
 
Re: Wikiland; Episode 1: The Return of the Prophecy

Yoshiwalker said:
Really the only ones I think are corny are ones that are based on video games, movies, etc.

And cliche plots like this.

I was actually going to make a story based on random tropes.
 
Re: Wikiland; Episode 1: The Return of the Prophecy

New Super Mario said:
Perosnality: Nice and friendly.

Name: New Super Mario
-_-

That's it?
Yoshiwalker said:
Really the only ones I think are corny are ones that are based on video games, movies, etc.

And cliche plots like this.

It sounds cliche-er than it actually is. I'm a very good writer, so I can make it worth your while if you stick around. I have already agnowleged that it's corny, no offense is taken, but at least wait for my prologue before making a judgement.
 
Re: Wikiland; Episode 1: The Return of the Prophecy

New Super Mario said:
Doofenshmirtz Evil said:
New Super Mario said:
Perosnality: Nice and friendly.

Name: New Super Mario
-_-

That's it?
What else do you want? I wear the same clothes as my avatar. Do you need weapons?
I was just looking for a little more detail behind your character, like Javelin and Brother Love (through PM) did. I would prefer it if you added weapons and special abilities, but it's not really mandatory. Your character is one of the five vital characters of this trilogy, so I would like some more detail in the personality and history. No offense.
 
Re: Wikiland; Episode 1: The Return of the Prophecy

As you said, you're the story writer, you should decide the personality if they don't want to make one.
 
Re: Wikiland; Episode 1: The Return of the Prophecy

Doofenshmirtz Evil said:
New Super Mario said:
Doofenshmirtz Evil said:
New Super Mario said:
Perosnality: Nice and friendly.

Name: New Super Mario
-_-

That's it?
What else do you want? I wear the same clothes as my avatar. Do you need weapons?
I was just looking for a little more detail behind your character, like Javelin and Brother Love (through PM) did. I would prefer it if you added weapons and special abilities, but it's not really mandatory. Your character is one of the five vital characters of this trilogy, so I would like some more detail in the personality and history. No offense.
Alright, I can throw fireballs, and use my dog, Jake (look it up on Userpedia "Jake the Facepainted Dog") to chase away my enemies. Jake only respects me, and my family. I can also transform into the different kinds of Pikmin. That enough?
 
Re: Wikiland; Episode 1: The Return of the Prophecy

Yoshiwalker said:
As you said, you're the story writer, you can decide the personality.

I guess, but it's really his character. I just write what they do, and make any neccessary edits to the character to make them fit the situation.

I think I could add to his personality to make him flesh out more.

EDIT: Wait, he just posted more.
 
Re: Wikiland; Episode 1: The Return of the Prophecy

Could you change my title to Lord Javelin?

It just sounds more imperious and formal.