The Legendary Heroes

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Hey, everybody! I'm PyroGuy6 and I am writing a story on Userpedia named The Legendary Heroes. This is the official thread for it, so put your comments on it here.

Userpedia link: http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/The_Legendary_Heroes

Credit to MCSoulja for editing and NSM for the soon-to-come new logo. :lakitu:

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Current status: Chapter 9 done! Read now at http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/The_Legendary_Heroes/Part_9, or Stuffwell will be inclined to notice that you didn't.
 
Great news! *coughsarcasmcough* Chapter 8 is OUT! Featuring UltraMario3000!

http://userpedia.adriels.com/wiki/The_Legendary_Heroes/Part_8
 
I like it because it doesn't use a first person narrative, but I have to criticize that the personalities that each character have doesn't seem exact and the prophecies are too specific and dumb like the one from the Zelda CD-i, i.e. "It is written, only Link can defeat Ganon."
 
The only prophecies I like are ones that are really vague, but then somebody reveals the true meaning later in the story.
 
Pansage said:
The only prophecies I like are ones that are really vague, but then somebody reveals the true meaning later in the story.
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Per, something like that, not something straight up front.
 
Ryōga Senba said:
Pansage said:
The only prophecies I like are ones that are really vague, but then somebody reveals the true meaning later in the story.
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Per, something like that, not something straight up front.
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leik:
Person 1:*tells prophecy*
Person 2:Cool, it's about me
That is no good.
 
Pansage said:
Ryōga Senba said:
Pansage said:
The only prophecies I like are ones that are really vague, but then somebody reveals the true meaning later in the story.
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Per, something like that, not something straight up front.
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leik:
Person 1:*tells prophecy*
Person 2:Cool, it's about me
That is no good.
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OR soo obvious. Also I have to say in one of the first chapters it seems like your an idiot for not connecting logic and figuring out your one of the heroes.
 
Chapter 10 is finally out. Read at http://userpedia.adriels.com/The_Legendary_Heroes/Part_10!