A Pokémon Story.

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unit4545

King Bowser
Chapter 1: [name pending]

Somewhere, far away from any place man has explored before, lies a very large island with a very small name. It is called Interville. It has many cities and towns connected by a series of tubes. I live in Onyxat, a quaint village filled with colorful wildlife, colorful buildings, and colorful smells.

Writers note: the story will continue on, but i'm cutting this short for now, for I have other things to do.
 
Secret Facepalm said:
Writers note: the story will continue on, but i'm cutting this short for now, for I have other things to do.
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If an author doesn't even care about his own story, he shouldn't expect anyone else to care about it either.

I certainly won't bother doing a more elaborate review than that.
 
When BPK and I saw that this was started by Unit, we just skipped it.

Now, I read it, and don't get it.
 
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