Songs I wrote :P

Xluidi

beep bep boop
(This is just copied from the Xephyr Board)

Music Jam
This isn't a musical
This is a music jam
This is a carnival

This is a music jam
This is life to max
This is a car-ni-val-of-light (- means beat)

<ramdom crap> (solos, bridges, ect)

Have you heard
The scent of the wind
It gives clues of of how
To pass with time

It's like a breed
Like a wind of change
Like a new time
A new age

What a time to advance
To get your gear
Dont let them trick you
Don't just pass away

Nothing lasts forever
Except your emotions

It's like a breed
Like a wind of change
Like a new time
A new age

A new age
A new time
Don't give up
Even in life
Neither after that

The End o:

Can't Wait

Chorus 1:
I can't wait
To get myself another car
I can't wait
To stay myself in high class

Verse 2:
This high prize lady,
she showed me how his brother
survived this crisis
eating shoes with spices.

Chorus 2:
I can't wait
To get myself another car
I can't wait
To stay myself in high class

I can't wait
to get myself another Grammy
I can't wait
To say my old boss "*uck off*

<bridge>
<solos>

Chorus 3:
I can't wait
To get myself another car
I can't wait
To stay myself in high class

I can't wait
to get myself another Grammy
I can't wait
To say my old boss "*uck off*

Verse 3:
It was a rough time for all of us,
but in the end,
we passed it.

What do you think?
 

xXmoraleXx

ska punk fan, even though i dont know what ska is.
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Yay for someone else who writes lyrics, i shall give you a 8/10. Only because i like my songs to ryme a lot. :)
 
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I like to write lyrics, but I can't sing them because my voice sounds like a 9-year-old's.
 

xXmoraleXx

ska punk fan, even though i dont know what ska is.
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ScarecrowPerson said:
I like to write lyrics, but I can't sing them because my voice sounds like a 9-year-old's.
I cant either unless its a odd singer like billy talent's frontman. I sing like him

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you repeat phrases to much in the song. Unless you group them together so its as if you are ment to repeat it while singing.
 

xXmoraleXx

ska punk fan, even though i dont know what ska is.
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Yah they are, i noticed that every single anonamous person on the internet posts lyrics like this but very very emo. Glad someone has a change of pace. I personally write lyrics more mainstream with catchy ness and rymes. Think the songwriters for linkin park, zebrahead, anti- flag.

Back to his lyrics, with further inspection i noticed its written like one of those sonic next gen themes that wasnt by a punk, ska, or rock band. Like silvers theme (dont quote me on that)
 
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