To the writers: Poetry, rap, song lyrics, etc. Sharing/Discussion/Rating Thread

[Quickie-la]

I have a recent one that I wrote for my fiance, spelled as meant to be pronounced.

each and ev'ree time I get a glance
a little circumstance
to basque upon those bluegreen eyes
all plans I'd made are no surprise
a kiss on cheek, a glance so meek
to lay in grass at park all week
I pet the ear hairs meet your tongue
heavens been here all along
-
jonathan you are my song
huehuehue :3

Anyone have videogame or anime raps or poetry? Or maybe political/religious? Or lovesongs/poetry
Discuss! :D

 

[Magikrazy]

I made a rap about Twix (as in the candy bar) once.

yo yo yo imma do my thing
hey hey hey heres my thing

one two three, four five six
seven eight nine, ten eleven twix

left or right which should I choose
either way I cannot lose

because twix is the candy that I favor
theres no beatin that chocolatey flavor

when I open up the wrapper and see whats inside
the smile on my face grows ten miles wide

so the next your life needs a fix
take a moment and chew it over with twix

What happened was I was just gonna count but then I got to twelve but it didn't rhyme with six. I pretty much just freestyled after that (and before that tbh).

 

[Quickie-la]

I made a rap about Twix (as in the candy bar) once.

yo yo yo imma do my thing
hey hey hey heres my thing

one two three, four five six
seven eight nine, ten eleven twix

left or right which should I choose
either way I cannot lose

because twix is the candy that I favor
theres no beatin that chocolatey flavor

when I open up the wrapper and see whats inside
the smile on my face grows ten miles wide

so the next your life needs a fix
take a moment and chew it over with twix

What happened was I was just gonna count but then I got to twelve but it didn't rhyme with six. I pretty much just freestyled after that (and before that tbh).

That's so awesome. You should sell it to the Twix company to make a commercial!! It's definitely good enough.