My first sprite comic

ShyGuy27

The Cardinal is dead -- long live The Cardinal!
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Moral: Shy guys are evil. Do not get in their way.

Comments?
 
Ephidel said:
Not bad at all. There needs to be less space between the panels, though, and they need to have borders.
K, thanks.

BTW, you really like renaming yourself after FE characters.
 
ShyGuy27 said:
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Comments?
The ending is ftw. (If it didn't have Mr. Saturn in the last box, it wouldn't have been a comic at all. :D)
 
Bumped because new users should not be deprived of my comics.

*shields against inevitable negative comments about this post*
 
*Re-bump*

It's not bad, actually. Keep up the good work and maybe you could make a successful comic series. :)
 
It's better than a lot I see on Userpedia, I must say
 
ShyGuy27 said:
ThePanning.png

Moral: Shy guys are evil. Do not get in their way.

Comments?
It was better than a lot of comics out there.