Pokémon Sinnoh Region: OC Edition! CANCELLED LOCK PLEASE

[Mariorules25]

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Okay. He will catch them later on.

Thats good then

 

[Soundless Voice]

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Okay. He will catch them later on.

Thats good then

Yup. I'm probably gonna have to rewrite what I have so far now though. :P

 

[Mariorules25]

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..Shit sorry

 

[Soundless Voice]

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..Shit sorry

It's fine.

I don't have to completely rewrite it, I just have to erase some of it.

It's not a problem.

 

[YoshiMonsta]

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Can I make a second too?

 

[Lolcrawler]

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Challenger
Name: Vlad Benski (russian)
Age: 20
Pokemon:Luxray Rampardos Bastiodon Mismagius Lucario Hippowdon.
Moves: You say
Personality: Kind and charming. Sometimes acts rather condescending
Appearance: Pale skin, and sleek black hair. Always wears a tux.
Other FAQ: is Russian. Is a very good cook. Is good at a lot of stuff

 

[Soundless Voice]

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Can I make a second too?

Yes.

Challenger
Name: Vlad Benski (russian)
Age: 20
Pokemon:Luxray Rampardos Bastiodon Mismagius Lucario Hippowdon.
Moves: You say
Personality: Kind and charming. Sometimes acts rather condescending
Appearance: Pale skin, and sleek black hair. Always wears a tux.
Other FAQ: is Russian. Is a very good cook. Is good at a lot of stuff

Perfect. I will update the list.

 

[YoshiMonsta]

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Elite 4
Name: Leon Hunt
Age (Between 14-21): 17
Pokémon: Not all are from Sinnoh, Houndour, Mighyena, and Arcanine (very few but all are especially powerful)
Pokémon moves: Any that fit the pokemon I just stated
Personality: Very gruff and mean.
Appearance: Very muscular and has a big statche.
Anything else?: Nope.

 

[Soundless Voice]

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Okay. Looks good.

I'm almost halfway through with Chapter 1, then if he's still interested I'll send it to PTR (But I was hoping for an actual Beta Reader :/) and then I'll post it.

 

[YoshiMonsta]

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I could edit it too if necessary.

 

[Soundless Voice]

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I could edit it too if necessary.

Okay. PTR's posting it on Userpedia so I dunno who would work better.

 

[Stargatedalek]

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Team Galactic sign up (This goes for leader too):

Name: Star (nickname)
Age: 14
Pokémon grovyle, spearow-fearow, ekans-arbok, and wingull-pelipper
Pokémon moves: grovyle, has no battle moves, is more of an accomplise than a Poke'mon
ekans/arbok: acid spray, bite, wrap, and acid
spearow/fearow: fury attack, roost, drill peck, and aerial ace
wingull/pelipper: pluck, fly, surf, aerial ace, and thief
Personality:aggressive, has no problem with hurting people, or stealing Poke'mon, for profit, or herself, paranoid about protecting her Poke'mon and likely to pull them out of a battle early to prevent serious injury
Appearance : same as usual

Spoiler

Leader or no :no
Anything else?:"owner" of grovyle (as pet)


Do Pokemon which don't stay in Poke'balls and aren't used in battles count as characters? sort'a like meowth except without talking?


I would offer to edit/beta-read but it seems I'm not needed

 

[YoshiMonsta]

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I could edit it too if necessary.

Okay. PTR's posting it on Userpedia so I dunno who would work better.

Maybe if you want we could both edit for extra precautions that the other might have missed.

 

[Lolcrawler]

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Can I make a second

If so
Gym Leader
Name: Ben Tor
Type: Ghost
Pokemon: Drifblim, Mismagius, and Rotom
Age: 14
Personality: Tries to act friendly and cocky, but is actually solemn and mysterious
Appearance: t-shirt, jeans, cold black hair. Tries to look casual
Other FAQ: Can be seen in the middle of the night, outside, walking with pure white eyes. Rumor has it that a Dusknoir once took him to the spirit world.

 

[Soundless Voice]

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I could edit it too if necessary.

Okay. PTR's posting it on Userpedia so I dunno who would work better.

Maybe if you want we could both edit for extra precautions that the other might have missed.

I don't think it's gonna work with PTR and since you're older then maybe.

Or Star, whichever.

And Star, you're good

Lolcrawler, you're good too.

EDIT: @Star; The partner Pokémon don't totally count as their own character. They're just there.

 

[User4042]

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I could edit it too if necessary.

Okay. PTR's posting it on Userpedia so I dunno who would work better.

Maybe if you want we could both edit for extra precautions that the other might have missed.

I don't think it's gonna work with PTR and since you're older then maybe.

But have you seen yoshimonsta's story

 

[Soundless Voice]

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I could edit it too if necessary.

Okay. PTR's posting it on Userpedia so I dunno who would work better.

Maybe if you want we could both edit for extra precautions that the other might have missed.

I don't think it's gonna work with PTR and since you're older then maybe.

But have you seen yoshimonsta's story

Wait. That's true (No offense YoshiMonsta)

But if you have FFn, can't you go to the regular site and do DocX?

Otherwise I'll probably have to find someone else.

 

[User4042]

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I could edit it too if necessary.

Okay. PTR's posting it on Userpedia so I dunno who would work better.

Maybe if you want we could both edit for extra precautions that the other might have missed.

I don't think it's gonna work with PTR and since you're older then maybe.

But have you seen yoshimonsta's story

Wait. That's true (No offense YoshiMonsta)

But if you have FFn, can't you go to the regular site and do DocX?

Otherwise I'll probably have to find someone else.

I got a fancy new computer so I'm good to go

 

[YoshiMonsta]

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I could edit it too if necessary.

Okay. PTR's posting it on Userpedia so I dunno who would work better.

Maybe if you want we could both edit for extra precautions that the other might have missed.

I don't think it's gonna work with PTR and since you're older then maybe.

But have you seen yoshimonsta's story

What is wrong with my story? Even if my story doesn't have a few things my grammar isn't bad.

 

[Soundless Voice]

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I really don't know.

I PM'd PTR about DocX, but he hasn't responded. *Hinthint*

 

[YoshiMonsta]

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Well, you guys were acting as if it was horrible.

 

[Soundless Voice]

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Well, you guys were acting as if it was horrible.

It's not horrible.

I'm behind in grammar so actually I really didn't notice anything much.

I'm working on chapter 1 as we speak.

 

[User4042]

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I responded.

 

[Soundless Voice]

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I don't even see the PM anymore. Did you delete it?

 

[Dr. Javelin]

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I do, but I don't know how to make an article

All you really have to do is go to a page of the name you want your story to be named, and it'll prompt you (if you're logged in) to make a page.

I'm going to try to refrain from critiquing this story, unless you'd like my criticism. It's probably going to be harsher than normal, so...