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Re: The Real Life Wiki

Sent Chapter 6 to my editor, will be released soon (hopefully if he edits it quick :P).
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Edited. You might want to send me a second draft if you're still not sure if it's good or not.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Creative, but mediocore. Don't let that get you down, though. There's certainly plenty of room for improvement, and if you polish your writing style and gain more experience, you'll be pretty damn good.

Also, if you can, I'd appreciate if you came onto #userpedia or #mwchat so I could talk to you and give you some more feedback.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

You still have some of my comments in there.

I bolded them so you could see them more clearly if you read it in a forum post.

"Well" is also getting repetitive.
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That's one of my comments.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Don't Fear said:
Creative, but mediocore. Don't let that get you down, though. There's certainly plenty of room for improvement, and if you polish your writing style and gain more experience, you'll be pretty damn good.

Also, if you can, I'd appreciate if you came onto #userpedia or #mwchat so I could talk to you and give you some more feedback.
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Ok.

Thank you for your feedback, I'm trying improve it :)
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Yeah, I'm unfamiliar with Userpedia coding so I though that it was italicize code, not bold code, which is why I left it there. You don't normally bold in books, and some authors italicize.
 
Re: The Real Life Wiki

Jack Noir said:
Yeah, I'm unfamiliar with Userpedia coding so I though that it was italicize code, not bold code, which is why I left it there. You don't normally bold in books, and some authors italicize.
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MarioWiki code is same as Userpedia code.