Let's see your mad haiku skills!

Krizzy

Allo allo allo!
(alternate title: Rate the User Above's HAIKU!)

Write a haiku, or a series of haiku, and the person belows rates them, then writes more, &c.

Since there seems to be some confusion over what haiku is, let's leave it at just five syllables, then seven, then five. Like so.

Haiku's what this is.
Five, seven, then five again.
Perfectly even.
 

Garlic Man

Name-change free since 2018
Re: Let's see you mad haiku skills!

We just made a thread
Equally as poetic
Over at Xephyr
 

Garlic Man

Name-change free since 2018
Re: Let's see you mad haiku skills!

We were rating them?
I didn't even see that part
I'm too lazy to.


Oh and yours sucks. Need more commas?
 

Garlic Man

Name-change free since 2018
Re: Let's see you mad haiku skills!

In fact the title
Doesn't make a bit of sense
lrn2use grammar
 

Gumball Machine

Celestial Guide
You double posted.
Shame on you. Follow the rules.
That is all, good day.

President Iwata said:
We were rating them?
I didn't even see that part
I'm too lazy to.


Oh and yours sucks. Need more commas?
President Iwata said:
In fact the title
Doesn't make a bit of sense
lrn2use grammar
Not very nice, but you had the 5 7 5 syllables rule, so 7/10.
 

Koopayoshi

Shine Sprite
Quote (curse my noobyness!)
You double posted.
Shame on you. Follow the rules.
That is all, good day.
It has to be about grammer
 
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