I made my own Mario AU, Magré: The Road to the Divine Dragon, with the main protagonist Magré, based off of Princess Peach

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Magré (玛格瑞), the main protagonist

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How she looks like before she got the parasol from goddess Mary
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Celestial Dragon Emperor (天龙帝), the main antagonist

If you don't know the story, here is the story (feel free to translate it since it's in Chinese).

Basically, Magré (玛格瑞 in Chinese) or Divine Parasol Princess (神伞公主 in Chinese) is just a parallel/alternate universe version of Princess Peach, she was born at the Celestial Dragon Empire, here are some significant differences from Peach:
  1. She is more stronger than the original Peach
  2. She is a hybrid of Golden Dragon (五爪金龙) and Saiyan
  3. She has the abilities from Peach, Mario, Saitama, Sun Wukong, Goku and many more
  4. Unlike Peach, she does not have lips, her dress is shorter and she is not an actual Princess, she self described herself as an Princess after taking the parasol from Mary, the Goddess of Resolute.
  5. She's a Revolutionary Marxist
I made her look like this because Peach was my favorite character, but I don't want her to be kidnapped, which makes me wanted to create my own series which Peach was the main protagonist, but since she was a Princess, she would be busy ruling the Mushroom Kingdom and taking care of the Toads, so this left me only a choice, which is to directly use her design to create my new Super Mario character, and later, I started to blend the elements of Dragon Ball, One Punch Man and Black Myth: Wukong or Journey to the West into my own AU or fanmade series.

Any suggestions?
 

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It looks design-wise like you stuck a tail onto Princess Peach. If that's what you're going for, great, but I can't imagine many would look at that as an OC. I'd suggest changing the design a little to be more original.
A bit off-topic, but I think a few people in the Boards define OC as a character they use rather than an original character.
 
You said you made a new character in your original post though…?
Regardless, if this is Peach from an alternate universe, then it looks like all that you changed still was to add a tail. I think she needs to be differentiated more.
 
I forgot to tell you that dress isn't her dress, her dress originally belongs Mary, the goddess of resolute, and the crown belongs to King Xandorlex (or Shandori), before she looked like Peach, she was wearing a traditional Chinese outfit from Tang Dynasty.
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